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Review of chapter "Chapter 54" from CPTSkip
Ah! I am so glad to see a new update to one of my favorite stories. And, while I am familiar with the Number of the Beast, I have no idea of where your story is going now. And I love being surprised! I must say the idea of Andrew preggers boggled my mind. Lol!
Comments from author:
As was written, it was either that, or Jon preggers while Andrew goes crazy.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 54" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Well now, that is an interesting crossover...I wonder how Glinda will react to Willow.
Comments from author:
Quite the thought. But would it be the Glinda from "Wicked?"
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 54" from ebony
You can have my first born if you update soon.
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Is your firstborn a hot female above the age of consent? *winks*
Review By [ebony] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 53" from lunalurker
Today of all days, I wish so very much this was real, how it really had turned out.
May all the heroes and victims rest in peace, and for the rest of us to forge a better world, where things like this never happen again.
Thank you for writing.
Comments from author:
Myself, as well, as much of a partial victory as it was.


You are welcome. Without criticizing our men in uniform (I'm a veteran, myself), the only way that things like this don't happen again is that two things get fixed - resources need to go into the Middle Eastern region to provide for people, so that they don't believe that there is nothing better, and education needs to be put in place, so that young men don't believe that it is right and just to always attempt to harm and injure at the first provocation, and that you must destroy those not of your own beliefs. I'm hardly someone saying that it should be the last. There are times that it is called for, but if you feel that you have to target people who are not posing a direct threat to you (civilians who are not working in war industries), then you are cowards and savages, open to being killed off until you can learn better.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 53" from CPTSkip
Watching the 10th year anniversary of 9/11 on TV has been very depressing. Your story has brightened my day a whole lot. Thank you. And you even made me laugh. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I worked to get this done on time.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 53" from DofEire
Very nice, very nice...almost makes me feel a little sorry for the cretins...notice I said "almost"! The Leno monologue's a good touch, as well. =)
Comments from author:
Yeah, I thought so. On his first night back after 9/11, Leno said that he felt part of his job was cheer-guy for the country. And certainly it's poking fingers at people with Epic fails.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 53" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Yes well, it couldn't have happened to a nicer bunch of people. The bad luck I mean.

Who sees with equal eye, as God of all,
A hero perish or a sparrow fall,
Atoms or systems into ruin hurled,
And now a bubble burst, and now a world.

May God hold them and keep them close.
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Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 53" from borgrabbit
Haiku of loss:

Its wishful thinking
We can't change that day's events
Still—good sentiment
Comments from author:
I know, but, since they went back in time, they could. Thank you.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 52" from borgrabbit
A short chapter's haiku:

A treat short and sweet
A gift of reality
A carrot and stick

Please feel encouraged to write more.
Comments from author:
I do. :)
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 51" from borgrabbit
Was the other one Spike's Buffybot? Warren is such a rat, have him ratted and give the rat to his girlfriend. Is he redeemable?
Comments from author:
Yes. Willow's worked on both April and the Buffybot.

Warren's been shown both the carrot and the stick. I haven't completely decided, but if he's not redeemable, the stick will hit him very hard.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 51" from grd
Love the baby's names. I don't believe Warren will get it until he has a demonstration of the consequences. He seemed too sociapathic to care about anyone but himself. Feeding him to the skin eating demon might be more appropriate.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I took a bit from suggested names, and a bit original.

As far as Warren, I haven't decided whether the carrot of having Katrina, versus the stick of being completely taken down if he touches the Slayer's clan, will be enough. He may well insist on a demonstration.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 50" from slmncpm
go scoobies and family!
Comments from author:
Absolutely. I'm thinking that we'll get a bit more demonstrative with the Scoobies.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 50" from borgrabbit
Sweet, but short. Still, thanks for writing.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 49" from CPTSkip
Well done. I think having both an 'arch-demon' and a goddess guarantee a 'safe-room' for the Scooby kids makes it pretty darn safe. Lol! But with the CoWs 'reformed', Buffy not dying and letting the First in to the Buffyverse, and Glory/Ben taken out, who is the next Big Bad? I look forward to reading what comes next.
Comments from author:
The next little bad I've just shown you. There are two Big Bads on the horizon, both foreshadowed...We'll see which comes first.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 48" from CPTSkip
Nice way of inserting Dawn into the new time-line. I know killing Ben was the best way to take out Glory with minimum collateral damage, but it still seems wrong. Oh, well, eggs, omelets, and all that. BTW, will Warren still eventually create the Buffybot? I hated Warren, but I did like the Buffybot. Lol!
Comments from author:
It was wrong, and you'll notice that Willow wasn't all flowers and kittens about it in her e-mail. It was just the least sucky of a lot of sucky options. They'll deal, though.

For more than one reason, the Buffybot won't be around. Not because I don't like her (I do), but because the surrounding story won't support her being made, unfortunately. A nice story involving her is Legend, a ST:TNG crossover, if you'd like..
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 May 11] • Not Rated
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