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Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool twist. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23" from VillageOrchid
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Oh, good. Even though you haven't dramatized it, they haven't forgotten about the mayor.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from VillageOrchid
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I like the element of being confrontational and engaging with Willow's parents. Great new ground!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from VillageOrchid
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A very interesting pre-emptive strike... and good for team work.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you had one of the "less involved" or redundant characters do some problem solving in the group dynamic. They still have to protect Joyce from Ted, since she's the only one not seeing anyone that they know of... not clear if Faith's watcher or Joyce were at the beach day, but otherwise continuing to be a good story. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoying the AU-ey goodness. I only hope that they don't do too much all-in betting, because things can change the future and then they could end up "all out!"
Comments from author:
They were taking a good 90%+ chance that the bet would fall right, and they all were able to look ahead to see that they might need a good amount of green. Beyond this and next year, you won't hear about it, because 1) the possibility of something messing it up goes up, 2) the mechanics of betting that much and keeping it under the radar will get onerous, and 3) They'll have enough from another source.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from VillageOrchid
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Sad that Kendra died sooner in this version of the world, but she did have better quality of life. Xander might be effected and sad, but still a better girlfriend outcome than others might boost his sense of self-worth in the long-run.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Someone had to die, or everyone's just cartoon characters. And I like Kendra, but, honestly, she's not Faith.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoying the forward moving au-ey goodness. Especially liking how you aptly dramatized why Kendra might like something different to wear even before Xander asked her out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from VillageOrchid
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Wicked smart and great twist for Buffy! Wasn't there an ancient priestess guardian of the scythe who would probably kill Xander? Wasn't it in a temple of some kind that maybe only had the transportation element under sunnydale?
Comments from author:
Actually, it was a Guardian of the Slayer line, and since Caleb and co. uncovered the Scythe in the original timeline, she wasn't guarding it in particular. However, she's still grooving in that particular mausoleum, so we might hear from her.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from VillageOrchid
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That's cool. Maybe Willow didn't tell them about the Mayor yet... or it is part of the plan to show the mayor that the slayer could potentially be of benefit to him or on his side... and they the seemingly don't know that much about him... or if they do... they respect his power.... or he could think about killing them all.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from VillageOrchid
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I like that you have Xander still a teen, but still contributing to the problem solving.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
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Not clear if they are meeting in the library or at the Summers home (which would make more sense not being directly over the hellmouth).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
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How about picking up Faith from her hell... even if she's just potential now...or trying to have Wesley wisened up a little sooner?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from Cmiller
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What are you going to do about Tara? Is she going to get with Faith like she did Willow in the show? Or is Oz sticking around? Any way love the story so far add more soon.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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