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Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from tigerfanfrv
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it seems to be fallowing the same plot as a few other fics, but thats not a bad thing. i like these fics. i am interested in reading how things go down. keep it up i just discovered this fic today!
Review By [tigerfanfrv] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Cash or Credit?" from Nosi
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Another good chapter. I like Buffy determined to shield Anakin and trying to interfere with his conversation with Padme, and all arising out of her cynicism about her own relationship. Also loved this line : "We appreciate you spending your hard cold cash here with us here in Hell’s Junkyard.”
Review By [Nosi] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from (Current Donor)BuffyCharmed
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Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update. :)

-Katie
Review By [(Current Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Jedi" from Nosi
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This is really very good so far. It's very well written and well paced as well, with only a very few tiny typos and misspellings (mostly in pronouns). Nice parallels here between Obi-Wan and Buffy both trying to meditate and not succeeding, both feeling something there that they can't pin down.
I'm curious though, has Buffy really lost her Slayerness, or just lost her ability and will to use it ?
Also (probably a nitpick), Buffy was 17 at the end of Becoming - did you change her age deliberately ?
Comments from author:
I actually did change her age, mostly because I wanted her and Anakin to be a wee bit closer together in age. Especially if I ever do the Attack of the Clones ten year jump, but that was the only reason why. Kudos for noticing though and thanks for the review.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from Drow
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Please, don't fall prey to the usual lazy plot line. Buffy's presence should make a difference as the story goes along. Shmi would be a good start, Buffy would NEVER leave her on Tatooine alone. Buffy would either force the issue or refuse to leave.
Review By [Drow] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from sampson
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I love this story. Can't wait to read the rest. Please hurry. (just kidding) But I am really enjoying this story.
Review By [sampson] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Periculum" from Cmiller
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I started reading this @ ff.net but then I noticed that there was more here so this is were I will review and say I love the story so far can't wait for more
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from (Recent Donor)ElessarNett
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Fun story. Can't wait for the next installment.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElessarNett] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from (Recent Donor)tammin
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I look forward to reading the next chapter and seeing how you will get both Buffy and Ani out of Watto's hands.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Setting a Course" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to the 'no emotions' edict of the Council. What colorful phrase will she come up with for them? LOL.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Cash or Credit?" from kerrykhat
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I'm really loving this story so far and can't wait to see what you have in store once Buffy meets the rest of the crew. :D
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Lost in a Galaxy Far, Far Away" from DarkPhoenix
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Loving it so far wolfie! Keep them coming!
Review By [DarkPhoenix] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Periculum" from jezaeiri
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ohhh you posted it on here too. whoot. Love as always.
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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