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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from (Past Donor)Snag
Review:
Nice. Though there are a couple of other Star Wars crossovers that follow this pattern, yours manages to retain its own identity. Bonus points for Buffy not cleaning the clocks of Maul and Dooku.
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from AbeEllis
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Truly amazing!
The outcome of this chapter was mostly predictable jet somehow you managed to put in some surprises.
You have set an interesting stage for future chapters with Obi-Wan accepted for his Trials.
There are so many interesting possibilities for this setting!
I honestly can't wait to read more.
Please ad another chapter asap!!!

P.S.: I like that you have chosen a female Exile. I always liked the female Exile better.
Review By [AbeEllis] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Dusel
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The moment I read Force Bonds I immediately made the connection with KoToR 2, I have the game on my deskstop actually, love it. And I also love the Exile, powerful Buffy will be.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Robby
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Great chapter, never saw that coming!!
Review By [Robby] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Iceflame
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Excellent addition to the story. And an understandable reason why the Jedi feared the Exile.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from Nosi
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It was a good chapter even though you struggled with it. I found the reactions and inter-reactions of the Jedi masters to be the strongest part, although Buffy's thoughts made good reading too. And so now we're off to Naboo !
Review By [Nosi] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Second Time's the Charm" from kerrykhat
Review:
I'm pretty sure I've already told you this a million times (OK, if not that much, than at least a couple hundred), but I love how you capture the Jedi Council and the intricate ties between all the members. You can see each distinct personality and how it influences their decisions on whether to accept Buffy and Anakin into the Order.

I can't wait for the next update!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from Tanydwr
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Nice work.
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from Keshkreature
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Loved the Dooku interaction, and how he kept her slightly off guard, while still being friendly. Thanks for the update!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from borgrabbit
Review:
Slayage haiku:

Find mind of no mind
Focus on purity's flame
Tear out his darn throat

☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

Pre-evil Dooku? Now I'm curious why Buffy was uncomfortable with the training saber. Would meditation bring Sineya to the table? Still a great story.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from Nosi
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It was a fun chapter and a good portrayal of both Buffy and Dooku there. I'll be happy to see them go off to Naboo though and what you have planned for there.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from Sahugani
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love the story so far! keep it up.
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from AbeEllis
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Definitely one of your best chapters yet.
Very good how you worked out Dookus great respect for Qui Gons opinion - very "in character".
The last part with Buffy not being a Jedi jet is also very good. For the first time Buffy fits her character as painted in the earlier seasons completely.

Keep up the good work and update soon.
I can barely wait to read more.
Review By [AbeEllis] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three: A Lightsaber in the Hand" from AwesomeGeek
Review:
OK, number one - Buffy the Banana Slug = awesome!
and two - Master Dooky = GENIUS!

You know i love this hon! It's beyond awesome.
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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