Lol! I loved the way your story ended. I hope Angel spends the rest of miserable unlife looking over his shoulder just in case Mommy Justice decides to find his cowardly ass again. I hope a plot bunny eventually shows up to give us more of your delightful story. I'd love to see J/J Judge some of the other canon characters in BtVS. Like somehow L/L eventually meeting Professor Maggie, or Faith's mother, or Tara's family. There might even be a couple of CoWs who deserve a little justice of their own. Lol! "Off with heads!"
Very enjoyable romp, I think the creatures of the night have much more to fear than Buffy could ever offer with Joyce. And somehow I don't think Xander's parents would survive much longer with her around. Thanks again for a great story.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I just wanted to say that I thought this was a good story, though I would have enjoyed a scene where Joyce revealed exactly what happened to her to Buffy and the rest of the Scoobies. I also wanted to say that I do enjoy reading the rest of the stories you have on the site and I hope you continue you work for a long time to come.
Yet another great update. Loved the Scooby hugs and the fact that Giles survived his encounter with Justice. Oh my! Their evening conversation with Joyce is going to be interesting. Interesting in the sense of the old Chinese curse of course. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I am enjoying to forward moving AU twists. Evil hates a vacuum, and I wonder what force will send a new mayor or mayoral candidate or even temporary military law control of the town.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I tend to wonder why authors, book and otherwise, find it necessary to describe the chest size of a character whose size is already familiar from a tv show or movie. other than that, amusing story
edit: *shrug* wasn't offended, just confused. Track down a few of my reviews where I've ticked the author off royally due to my complaints, if you want to compare. heh. Though I can see why some retail book authors would want to add something like it in, somewhat... They ran out of things to write and needed to meet the "number of words" quota that the publishers give them.
At least it's better than a page and a half of sex that has nothing to do with the plot at all
Comments from author:
Okay, okay, it's gone, if it offends you that much. I suppose next, us authors will have to use "height-challenged" when we refer to Buffy as....(whispers) "short."
