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Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from Clandestine
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Awesome update! LOL. Can't wait for more! I really like the way you've portrayed Dawn, and especially how she called Riley to at least try to verify the Stargate program is legit. It'll be very interesting to see what happens next...
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from RevDorothyL
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Graham Miller being at the SGC certainly makes for some interesting possibilities, and I really enjoyed the trust and ease with which Riley and Dawn could converse, even if everything had to be semi-coded. Another great chapter in this intriguing fic.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from spacey
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this is pretty neat. i'm a little unsure of the timeline stargate wise.... when does this take place? your summery indicates that minijack will be there so it must be 'future' like the buffy timeline...?
Review By [spacey] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices Given and Choices Taken Away" from Rhyssia
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Innnteresting.

Looks like the last line cut off in mid-sentence.
Comments from author:
Ooops! Accidentally dropped the last two words. It's fixed now.

Thanks for the heads up!

Min
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from PATM
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Slit her wrists? Oh puhleeze! How about "That's interesting,but boring" in a faux German
accent ala Artie Johnson style; word. I did enjoy the story though. I have one quibble,
this Go'uld was hanging around waiting for someone to take him to the states?
Review By [PATM] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from spk
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I am definitely intrigued. Can't wait to read more. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from willowbee
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Interesting start to the story.
Review By [willowbee] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from chajalive
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Phenomenal. I really liked this. Dawn seems a bit younger than 30, but hey, we can all stay young.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from RevDorothyL
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Glad to have another chapter of this, and I think you've captured the decency and honesty that was Major Davis very well (why he always stood out from every other Pentagon-related person the SGC had to deal with -- he was astute enough to survive a political environment, but preferred to be as straightforward and genuinely decent as he could be).

Looking forward to more, whenever you can get to it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from mousemt
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Lovely beginning. I particularly like how you're presenting Dawn's thoughts. It's fun. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from Clandestine
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LOL. I love the ending of this chapter. Great job!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from AllenPitt
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Funny last line, but she would be smarter not to say stuff like that.... and I HAVE to wonder if Giles/old-style Watchers knew about Goa'uld from old watcher journals dating back to ancient Egypt. It seems to me the US Gov (and others) would be desperate for people who can translate Sumerian & other old languages, and thus there have to be some watchers working for them (ex-watchers / current ones, who knows) ? The British gov. knows about the SG now, so that would tie in.
So--I take it Dawn went off to DC and hasn't heard from Buffy et al in years? Not surprising, part of growing up is becoming independent, and Buffy was the mom- figure, so she'd be the one D. would rebel against (for good reason)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from Scrappychic
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Great start to the story. I'm usually not a fan of the scooby bashing stories, but you aren't taking it too over the top. Thank you for that. I can't wait to see how this story develops.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from (Recent Donor)Emergency
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Keep those chapters comin!!! I'm loving it so far :P
Review By [(Recent Donor)Emergency] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So You Admit There Was a Creature?" from Glongi
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Yay!!! There is hope!

Good start, I wait the next installments!

I would like to read later, that even if Dawn had a rocky relationship with her sister(mothering her), maybe with the other Scoobies she can have a connection even now. Ok that Willow and Buffy and Faith - even maybe Giles - is slayers and watcher (and that means they can be dead), but Xander (and Oz) can have a "normal" life...

Thank you!
Bye!
Review By [Glongi] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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