Awesome that your writing more to this! Yay! Really great new chapter too!
I loved Dawn beating the crap out of Raina and giving her back to Marcus. Brilliant. Pity she couldn't have just killed her though. lol. It's nice to see Dawn taking an active role as Nimir-Ra though.
I wonder how Nathaniel feels about his little sister being his Nimir-Ra? Also I wonder what Jean-Claude's response will be to a new Alpha, a new leader of the Pard, in his territory?
As for pairings... well there's Micah of course, Asher, maybe even Richard after he kills Marcus and Anita leaves him because he's a 'monster'... it's really up to you. I do think it would be good for whoever it is to be an Alpha though *shrugs* Almost any pairing would be awesome.
Anyway, I definitely look forward to reading more!!
****Also, congrats on being an Auntie! I hope your niece keeps strong and makes it!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [4 Oct 09] • Not Rated
This is damn good. Please tell me your going to continue it. I love how Dawn is going to be the protecter now, that she is an alpha waiting for the right moment.
Interesting story. I loved Dawn being a wereleopard and Nathaniel's younger sister. I also love her being the one who killed Gabriel to protect Nathaniel and the Pard, instead of Anita. I can definitely see her as a powerful Alpha with the life she had with Buffy and the Scoobies.
I would love to read more of this wereleopard Dawn and her role as the the new Nimir-Ra of the Pard...
Anyways, this was a very good fic and no matter if you write more or not, I really enjoyed reading this!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
First off, I really love the manip. Very awesome. And second, have you considered expanding on this? I really like the idea. Regardless of if you do or don't, I really liked it.