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Review of chapter "I, Stewie... You, Harmony" from CPTSkip
Review:
I loved the small battle between Cordy and Stewie. However, I do think Cordy has met her match. She should just give Stewie Harmony and move on. But Harmony? Stewie could do better. Unless he is a breast man and considering his size, he probably is. As I read that part, I was mentally picturing a sled full of Russians throwing one of the party to the wolves to get away from the whole pack. Lol!

I did find a couple of mistakes in grammar or punctuation. One was in the line where Xander thought: Are you suicidal. It should have been: Are you suicidal? since it was a question. All in all, I am enjoying your story as I laugh along with Stewie's Evil plots and plans. Molock is so just toast in Stewie's toaster. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the tip. I'll take care of it.

I'm glad you like it.

Raf.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I, Stewie... You, Harmony" from Morgomir
Review:
Funny. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angel" from FireWolfe
Review:
I love Stewie and Xander as a minon is fantastic as is the shovel talk More please.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Stay tuned for more wacky adventures with the new twisted, but dynamic duo.

Raf.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angel" from Greywizard
Review:
now, I absolutely LOVE Stewie!!!! ;-)

And I really like his way of presenting the 'shovel talk.' ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I hope I can keep this up.

Stewie is a little tough to work with.
He keeps making these demands...

Raf.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from TheDon
Review:
nice. this chapter has been redeeemed. thats what im talkin about. im half expecting for stewie to have that weapons silo in his closet like he does when lois finds it after he became president of the world. just awesome, funny too. until next time

-The Don

P.S. is Stewie a latent homosexual like he is in family guy?
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I had to build up to it.
And since I write the story on site, sometimes you don't get the whole story until the chapter is done.

I'm not going to use the homosexual angle that they have in Family Guy. I was never too comfortable with someone that young expressing their sexuality. Children that young are not sexual. I don't think they know how they're going to lean, until they grow up a little more, until they enter puberty and their hormones take hold. That's when their orientation will most likely be determined. A three, or even four year old, no matter how smart, like Stewie is portrated in the show, is just too young to make that determination.

That said, I have a vision for him, and sticking to F. G. cannon would ruin future story lines.

Again thank you for the great reviews.

Raf.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from war
Review:
nice to see someone knock some sense into Angel.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Raf.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angel" from CPTSkip
Review:
I love your story. Stewie is just so perfectly Evil. But I really wish he had set off the bomb and dusted Angel. The whole Buffy/Angel thing always squicked me out. Hello! 250 year old guy lusting after a 15/16 year old girl? Angel was such a perv. I so look forward to more of your delightful story. Stewie Rules! Or at least he should. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Angel will not get out of this relationship without some pain while Stewie is around.

Raf.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from TheDon
Review:
wtf is stewie doing?he hasnt really done anything other than glare and say 'who do i have to kill' for the last few chapters. i was hoppin stewie was gonna come into the game and just straight shit on bitches but he hasnt really done much so i dont know if im just readin a season recap or somethin. anyways i still wanna see what you got planned though since stewie IS a criminal mastermind so whatever you got planned should be suitably awesome

-The Don
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Still working through the chapter. There should be more Stewie actio0n by this point. check it out
Raf.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angel" from Infinix
Review:
Hopefully Stewie's influence starts to change things more soon. It's a bit odd that Buffy was fine with sending Xander home but she wanted to keep Angel "for safety".

You repeated:

"There's a lot of weird people outside at night..." Buffy starts to explain.

Joyce starts toward the kitchen. Buffy, Dawn and Stewie come after her.

"...I just feel better with you safe and sound inside. You guys must be beat." she continues.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the tip.
corrected it just now
Raf
Review By [Infinix] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Most vampires only breathe to dump exertion toxins or speak. Snoring comes from breathing loudly as you sleep. If it gets to risky levels, that's sleep apnea..

Vampires generally don't snore.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from FireWolfe
Review:
Yah know with Stewie training the scoobies I feel sorry for the badies. lol. More soon I hope.

Fire
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from TheDon
Review:
im surprised xander didnt hear angels lack of heartbeat
Comments from author:
Didn't have the opertunity.

Got stunned by the blow to the head and positive impression he left with the wall. The smell from the other vampires, Angel's grooming products.

The kiss from Buffy. And so on.

Thanks for the review.
Raf.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angel" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The next day." from JessieMidnight
Review:
LAMO!!!!!!!! Okay you gotta keep this story up. I love it. Also for clarrfication how old is Stewie ? In with him being a Summers he would be allowed to advance and not me held back as much as in the Griffins. Also having a Buffy as a big sister would allow him to at least see that while he in an evil genious (which it seems everyone is aware of for the most part.) That he knows that there different types of evil. Also to know that while he wants world domination. There are demons who are truly far more evil that Stewie could ever hope to be. Besides thos observations...this story is hilarious and keeps true to the show and still a good AU. A very fine line...if that is your intention. If not...well this an AU fic. Kick ass. :)
Comments from author:
I'm going to try and stick to the original universe as much as I can, but with Stewie.
Other evil entities beware. You're trespassing on Stewie's private space. You have been warned.

Knowing about the real deal, just gives him more incentive to take over. How else is he going to protect his family if he's not the supreme being.

Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [JessieMidnight] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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