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Review of chapter "School... Meh!" from djhardim
Review:
I noticed that the story seems to be missing a few chapters. Any particular reason?
Comments from author:
Combining chapters into full stories.

Raf.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from grd
Review:
Love that Stewie does not always get his way. Love Xan taking care Joyce. Poor boy won't be able to walk when Dawn gets older too.
Comments from author:
Stewie will see some more set backs as the opposition get a little tougher, not many, but at least some.
Xander will be too exhausted to offer much resistance... Maybe?

Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [grd] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from darthridian
Review:
another great chapter, and i agree with stewie more upgrades will delay the deployment of their ships they can always upgrade them after they are complete after all, that's probably why it took so long to get the prometheus up in the show, well keep up the great writing.
Comments from author:
My take on that, get it up, as fast as you can. Get it up in Quantity, and then work on the quality.

Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from CPTSkip
Review:
I love your naughty Joyce. But Dawn is definitely still too young. Except for ice cream. Lol!
Comments from author:
I love her too. And you're right Dawn is too young, but just right for ice cream.

Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's afraid of the Big Bad Pink..." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update and I knew Stewie wouldn't be satisfied with one world, that boy has more ego than any Gou'ald. I can just see him introducing the X-com school of diplomacy using his AI and robots. Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Hotpoint got the best X-Com crossover out there. I'm not sure I can even come close to doing that justice. For now it'll stay close to home.

Thank you for the review.

Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from sunamee
Review:
Another great update. I look forward to seeing Stewie finding his own planet with resources to further expand his future 'empire'.

It also looks like your hinting that Stewie's hormones are starting to surface and has a bit of trouble controlling his 'good' side from coming out.

I look forward to the next update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from sunamee
Review:
I look forward to seeing what is inside.
Comments from author:
Anticipation... gotta love it.
Raf.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from rpgwarrior
Review:
Hooray Buffy and Cordy got together. I'm really glad that happened. My only nitpick on this story is that things never go really wrong for Stewie. I know the show had to maintain a status quo so Stewie had to screw up at the end of his plans in it, but Stewie not winning in the end is practically part of his character.
Comments from author:
Still early, but as the going gets tough, a lot of pain and disappointment will be spread around.

Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice update. I know you recycle a lot of the lines from the Standard Buffyverse, but your additions are just as funny. And Joss never had Buffy and Cordelia fall in love. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
RAF
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "This is... a Life?" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update and I laughed at what America considered Stewie's redeeming quirk.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
But I think I should back off the Bill Gatews Jokes. I am in the IT field and you never know where that'll take you.

Raf.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back to school." from grd
Review:
The Funniest thing was that it was not the Master's bones at all. Will owning all that keep vamps out?
Comments from author:
Stewie's keeping that one close to the vest.
Unless Xander asks about the new skeleton in the trophy room, right next to the Goa'uld skin Boots.

Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [grd] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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