WHOA! This is a slightly different concept. Buffy is now a Goa'uld. Apparently a good one. I'm assuming theat rather than Sineya being the First Slayer, she is now Buffy's symbiote. Obviously she's going to have to deal with the SGC. That's going to be a tough one because they, ESPECIALLY Jack O'Neill, distrust and hate the Goa'uld to the nth degree. I don't know how Buffy is going to get them to trust her. I'll be tracking!
Comments from author:
Well, there's more going on here than meets the eye, and it will all be revealed in time. Jack won't really be involved in this storyline much if at all, since it Ori oriented.
Thanks for tracking and promise not to disappoint.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer in a Box" from knightshift
Review:
Interesting premise, and very well explained. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
Review By [knightshift] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Please update soon cause I can't wait for Buffy and Jack to meet.
Comments from author:
Happy that you're enjoying the story, but unfortunately this story is an Ori story, which does not include Jack, since he was not part of the SG-1 team anymore.
Review By [ebony] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow...this is...so different...I LOVE IT! A bit rushed if you ask me, but as long as you put some more detail and emotion into your story, you have a blockbuster!
Comments from author:
Thank you. There's plenty more, and this first update is only the introduction and by no means meant to preclude all the yummy details yet to come.
*giggle* Mistress Buffy...*giggle* How twisted is it of me to picture her in one of Faith's outfits, holding a whip? So, was Sineya kinda like Egeria, the queen of the Tok'ra? Or something altogether different? Glad that Buffy's death didn't result in the Hellmouth getting opened for good. And cool for Angel that he got to be the hero.
Comments from author:
You crack me up. In a manner of speaking, and you could think of the bid players working together for the greater good with the Ancients kinda leading the pack.
Thought it only right to give Angel his moment in the "sun" per se, while also allowing everyone some closure.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Promising start, looks like it could be good. The only thing that worries me is you changing Buffy's body; I'm concerned that you might also change her personality and that she'll effectively be an original character with Buffy's name.
Comments from author:
I didn't really change her body, it was aged into adult body since she died as a sixteen year old. The power she received was intended for an adult woman. It will definitely be an adult Buffy. Yes, time and her surrounding will change her, but her personality will still shine through.
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