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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from FuzzyLeaf
Omg updaaaaaaaaate... more that is. :P I'm enthralled.
Comments from author:
LOL. I'll try.
Review By [FuzzyLeaf] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from spk
I am still definitely intrigued. I love the way you're writing this story. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Once I introduce the other shows, we'll have to see where Musie goes with the plot.
Review By [spk] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Loved this was great. I look forward to the next few chapters.
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Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from clarityfades
Great chapter! I really liked the doctors & hope they can bar @ least the pissy Scoobies from Buffy's room. & I'm really liking the Oz/Buffy & Buffy/Giles stuff. So cute she called him "Daddy"! Felt totally bad when she found out he wasn't her father. & ooh, can't wait to see exactly what the interns overheard & how they react. Oh, & I really enjoyed seeing Stein as his usual butthead self...that was a nice touch. :P
Comments from author:
I cried a little writing Buffy and Giles' scene. But writing Stein is easy; when he shows up in a story, he's an a**.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
So I'm thinking it was Oz who heard them discussing the others listening in in the waiting room. I loved the update and I look forward to the next bit. I'll have to go back to the beginning to check, but will it be Buffy/Oz? There are seriously not enough of those floating around. Anyhow, as usual I enjoyed your story and can't wait for more.

Comments from author:
You'll have to wait and see. Not entirely sure of the 'ship just yet. Doesn't seem fair to do to somebody who doesn't remember their name.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from slmncpm
good lord i hope they get a restraining order on her so called family. asshats.
Comments from author:
We need to get the right people in there to help protect Buffy. I should start introducing them in a couple chapters.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Plans and Schemes" from SassyFrass
Very nice update. I liked the bit with Giles and Oz. I'm looking forward to finding out what the interns heard from the others.
Update soon please!
Comments from author:
I was hoping to make it clear that it wasn't intentional on the part of the others what they were doing. They just were subconsciously acting that way.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from ncatt
Great way of handling what everyone's thinking. Can't wait to see how Joyce fails to get rid of Giles;) And it's so typical of the Scoobies and Joyce to be thinking in terms of Buffy's let them down rather than Buffy's been very badly hurt.

Oz is right, Willow does seem to be a kind, loving person; right up until she gets her feelings hurt, justifiably or not, then it doesn't even occur to her that there might be something going on that is not her concern.
Remember that bit in Phases when Oz declines to stay and help with the werewolf research? She goes over to his place and blows up at him because of it, mocks him for saying he's got problems right now and nearly gets them both killed because he wasn't locked up in time.

Beautiful rendition of Oz's thought processes, as we saw in Earshot there's a lot more going on in his head than he shows.

It's a good thing the Doctor's noticed what's going on, hopefully the shrink will as well.
Comments from author:
Joyce's plan will come out in the next chapter, but probably not be resolved for a couple after that because we have to meet the new people.

I just kinda felt bad for Oz that he picked the wrong girl. Willow's a little too selfish for my tastes - which her magick addiction and its fallout prove.

You'll be surprised what the shrink notices.
Review By [ncatt] • Date [22 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
I Really Loved this chapter. It definitely sets the stage for future things to come, IMO. I bet Joyce will try to have Giles deported or some such nonsense or claiming sexual abuse or brainwashing or something absurd like that.

Man the Scoobies (minus Oz) and Joyce need a major smackdown! I can't wait until Buffy, Giles, and Oz leave Sunnydale and head for Miami.
Comments from author:
You'll just have to wait for it, but trust me, it will be bad! As for the smackdown, we'll have to see. You think they're headed to Miami, huh? *evil grin*
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from spring
Wonderful. I really love how you did the pov's excellent job. I eagerly await the next installment.
Comments from author:
It seemed like a good way to find out what was happening without relying on dialogue - especially since those thoughts wouldn't be spoken out loud anyway.
Review By [spring] • Date [18 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from Cutiepie
Oooh, this REALLY isn't a Joyce-favorable story is it. Hank didn't actually abandon Buffy like she thought, but rather it was Joyce's manipulations that drove Buffy and her dad apart, just because she didn't feel like the "favorite"? That is horrible! More "bratty tween-age girl" than "mother" there. Reminds me of something from another story: "Buffy disappears, Giles searches high and low, and Joyce joins a book club."

I know you didn't say much either way, but I am now hoping that this will end up a Buffy/Oz pairing. I've long thought that they would be a very compatible match. He would adore her like she needs without needing to out-macho her (as Riley did, and even Angel to some extent), and she would be more than strong enough of a mate for his wolf side, especially if they can work together to get his wolf side under the control of his human consciousness. Can you imagine Veruca even making a dent in that bond? She'd be a beta at best, compared to the alpha predator that is the slayer.

A werewolf with a completely human mind would be almost the most effective companion for a slayer possible. He can only be killed by a silver weapon, which isn't something your average demon or vamp would be carrying around anyway, or a deathblow from another werewolf (also not likely to occur, at least with Buffy there).

Ack! I've been babbling! Sorry about that. I'll just try and wait quietly for your next update now.
Comments from author:
Nope, Joyce is not going to look good here. At least nobody can complain that I didn't warn them, though. And she's gonna get even worse, if you can imagine that.

I'm totally with you on the Buffy/Oz pairing; they would have been such a better couple than Oz/Willow or Buffy/Angel. I guess that's why we have fanfiction though - to fix the mistakes of the show.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [18 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from spk
I am definitely intrigued by Buffy's amnesiac thoughts about Giles and especially Oz. Loved that Oz figured out the reason behind Buffy's running. Definitely interested to read more. :)
Comments from author:
I was going to use Giles' thought, but then thought...Oz's would be more interesting - especially seeing as how he isn't usually very verbal. And without knowing that she's the Slayer, Buffy wouldn't understand that Oz's wolfiness is pinging on her radar. Since she doesn't have all her personal baggage cluttering up her mind and emotions, her radar will be much more sensitive.
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Okay. Funniest thing. I saw that you updated something in my 'Tracked Authors' list, and as I go to click your name, I say to myself: "Mmooch! I love you!" Then I saw the title of what you updated... and I answered it. I said, "I do! I do!"

I loved it. Buffy's reactions to everyone is great, and Oz's thoughts? Perfect. Waiting for more.

Comments from author:
LOL. Thanks for the ego boost.

While she won't say her thoughts, Buffy doesn't have the martyr filter to make her discount her reactions to everyone. Should make for some interesting confrontations when the time comes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: What’cha Thinking?" from nightshadowlife
awesome chap!!! i would love to beta for you any story you need!!!! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Just email me and I'll try to send you the next chapter of this story when it's done.
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Cause and Effect" from ncatt
Thanks, I've got more than a few Issues with these episodes myself and its good to see an author starting with the premise that yes, Buffy was being treated in a fairly horrible fashion by her 'friends'; rather than the everything would be so much better if Buffy did whatever "Insert Scooby of Your Choice" wanted.

There's a story you might be interested in tracking down, Five Things That Never Happened During Dead Man's Party by Gileswench. Unfortunately I've lost the link for it and can't remember all the details but one of the things was Giles telling the Scoobies that they didn't get to decide on a party at someone else's house, another was Joyce having the party arrested.
Comments from author:
Found the link. It was at *Of Demons & Destiny* - My favorite sections were the two mocha ones and the hootenanny one.

It will probably take more stories than I can count at before the annoyance for this episode starts to fade. Which means there will probably be more anti-Scooby fics on the horizon once this one is done.
Review By [ncatt] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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