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Review of chapter "Chapter 15: The Short Goodbye" from Harry
Review:
*Starts singing On the Road again by Willie Nelson* And that is what it is: Time to get On the Road again. Only this time, its not to England or Sunnydale. No, this time its to Miami Florida. And while Oz may be helping out Faith, its time Buffy started regaining her memory. And with the help of these relatives, its going to be a Family Affair in doing so.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
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I have been really enjoying this fic.
I hope you come back to it soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I don't think I'm going to like the next chapter, but it's required before I can get back to the fun stuff, so...
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from angeluscado
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So, I know it's been a year since you updated, but is there any way you're going to continue this? I really love the premise and I'd love to see how Buffy mixes in with the rest of the CSI Miami crew.
Comments from author:
I am; in fact I'm attempting to work out the next chapter now. Just have to decide how ugly the goodbye should get between Buffy/Giles and the Scoobies.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from NoirDetective
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This is very interesting take on buffys family relationships and. It was very interesting to read I hope it isn't abandoned I really would love to next chapter Cheers ND
Comments from author:
Nope, not abandoned, just not a lot of time to be writing these days.
Review By [NoirDetective] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from Vickzie
Review:
Really brilliant story! Please update some more soon
Comments from author:
I'm trying, but unfortunately, real life isn't cooperating with the urge to write recently.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from bradsan
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Yeah come on update. this one is so good but you know that already. only thing missing is another update. Pleaaaaaaaaaaase. I'm begging how pathetic is that "lol"

but try to update.

edit: that's to bad. Not about the job part because that one is good, but the waiting part. I'm glad I know because knowing is better than not knowing and I got this one on tracking so I won't miss a thing when you have the time to update. Hope you like the job and good luck with it.
Comments from author:
Sad part is that because of the nature of my new job, I thought I'd have a lot of free time to write; that isn't true...yet. Hopefully once I've adjusted, I'll be able to get Musie awake enough to help me write some updates.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from andiesimmo
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hey i have just re read this (again) and i have but one problem, i want MORE, so could you please please please PLEASE update again soon thanks :)
Comments from author:
I'm seriously hoping that work will settle down soon and I can use the slow periods to allow Musie to play, but right now, there's too much going on for that to happen.
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from brightnshiney
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This story is the most awesome story ever. BtVS/CSI Miami and Diagnosis Murder? I love all those shows.
I wasn't sure I'd like the whole Scoobie/Joyce bashing, but I did.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Glad I was able to get you to enjoy the bashing. Fortunately, that part should almost be over - except for a couple minor mentions in the future.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from zigpal
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Great update. Loving the new Buffy family, and I can't wait to see the non-heartbreaking chapter.
Comments from author:
You mean the semi-bashing chapter? Gee, what a shocker!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from bradsan
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You know, you could always give custody to both Hank and Calleigh, It would be a shared one and Hank won't loose Buffy. More important Buffy will feels wanted. He is not her biological dad but he is the only one she knows and loved even when she though he abandoned her. If he gives it to Calleigh alone then she would feel abandoned for the second time, I would.
It would also prove to her that he loves her no matter what. It will also prove that he put her in a mental hospital because he thought she was ill and needed guidance to get better.

I hope you'll give the Scoobies and Joyce what they deserve namely "hell". I really dislike them in your story. They weren't my favorites after Buffy came back from LA. The dislike became worse when they pulled Buffy from her rest. From that moment it's over for me. So please give the Scoobies "hell" and Joyce to of course she is not a nice woman in your story.

Hope you will update soon. good writing by the way. I almost forgot to say it.

edit: Ah but you forget one thing. A shared custody is harder to fight, it will be in Hanks favor to give her a "mother" and a father even if it's not her real mother. And joyce will have a hard time convincing the judge that she has Buffy's best intrest with so much witnesses who saw her do otherwise. And Buffy will gets her saying in who she wants to be at her agewise. But it's your story and I like what you write. I only want to show you the savest way and what I know about this situation.
Don't wait to long with an update this is really a good story.
Comments from author:
Well, part of the reason I didn't want to add Hank was because my Joyce might fight him out of vindictiveness. It's harder to go after her own niece without appearing like a b***h to a judge. Hank will be visiting often enough that Buffy knows he isn't trying to dump her on Calleigh.

If you dislike them, then I'm doing something right.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from divaslayer
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I am loving this story. I am a fan huge fan of anybody who hates the way Joyce treated Buffy as much as me. I'm not as big a fan of the Scoobies as I was, but I love Oz and Faith. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
It's nice that there's a small community of us, right?
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Thank you, mmooch, for this quick update!! Glad that things are going well for Buffy!
Comments from author:
It will be an interesting road to recovery, with a few surprises along the way, but she will have people to care about her at her side through it all.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from ShadesofGray
Review:
It's great to see people on Buffy's side. Hank was awesome - and of course Horatio and Calleigh are :D.

I'm looking forward to the not-so-tender good-bye scene. Joyce should be lynched!
Comments from author:
I love redeeming Hank...just because it's rather easy since we only saw one side of that story - which could have been manipulated by Joyce. Who couldn't love Horatio and Calleigh?
Review By [ShadesofGray] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from spk
Review:
Really liking how this is all coming together. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's a relief now that Buffy's almost to the point of leaving.
Review By [spk] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14: A New Direction in Life" from Harry
Review:
Well, it sounds like B and the G Man will be heading for Florida in the near future. And I suspect that with Faith keeping the Hellmouth closed, it will ease the pressure on Buffy's memories. And if Joyce DOES try and fight the order, SHE is the on who is going to end up seeing a Psychatrist.
Comments from author:
I have an idea or two about Buffy's memories returning; hopefully people will like them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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