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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Whichever way you decide to go (letting Buffy take the scenic route to Atlantis, or the express), I look forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
LOL. Glad you like the premise.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Hawkehunt
Review:
I'd suggest skipping ahead. If you go through the whole learning about the galaxy bit now, you'll still have to recap it every time the knowledge is used later anyway. If you skip ahead, you can introduce things as they become relevant, and you don't have to worry about maintaining continuity as much, either.
Comments from author:
You have a good point. I've decided to gloss over some events before having her meet the gang.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from (Recent Donor)Emergency
Review:
I'd skip forward. I wanna get straight into the action!!!
Comments from author:
LOL. Too funny, but at least you know what you want.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Emergency] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Ramenth
Review:
Very very cool story, though one thing confuses me. If memory serves, Proclarush means 'Lost in Fire'. Wasn't Atlantis on Terra Atlantus, while Taonas was on Proclarush?
Comments from author:
Hmm, I thought it was more like Proclarush = 'Land of...' Therefore Taonas was Land of Fire, and Atlantis was Land of Water. Sorry for the error. Can't figure out how I made that mistake now. It's been too long since I wrote it.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
MWHAHAHAHA

EDIT: But of course I am!!!! *evil cackle*
Comments from author:
You see, reviewers? I told you she was evil! LOL.
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from AllenPitt
Review:
Oh...so she'll find Atlantis first and be there when the Earth expedition first arrives? Hopefully the ship & city's AI is programmed to respond to her, as otherwise she'll be into the whole 'shields fail, drown' thing they almost had on arrival.
If you want to get weird with that--have her find the stasis chamber Elizabeth Weir is in (ie went back in time 10,000 years, then went into stasis waiting for herself to arrive)--maybe B. could save her from dying immediately? Blood transfusion reinvigorates? That way you can have 2 Weirs, which should confuse things really well for the new arrivals.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I have plans for our little Ursagga girl. Don't worry, she won't drown. I think the expedition team with be confused enough to find the city occupied by Buffy.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from kiwi
Review:
good start so far. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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