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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from DarkPhoenix
Review:
Oh, me like! can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Comments from author:
Thanks. There's a couple people who are in for a not-so-pleasant welcome from the Ursagga of Lantia.
Review By [DarkPhoenix] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from ReallyBored
Review:
Yay! Finally! A Buffy/Wraith story that doesn't have Buffy as a Boo-Hoo victim! You don't strip Buffy of her Cannon potential, nor do you leave her so underpowered that she could easily become Wraith brunch!

So, are the Buffyverse Humans Ancients? Or Alterians? Okay, that makes sense, since the Tau'ri are defined as being the second evolution of Humanity, on the planet. If the Alterians never left the planet, nor sufficient numbers Ascended, or other factors intervened, then the second evolution may not have happen. Yep, that direction looks good.

Okay, the SG Universe Alterians made their own version of a Slayer. But was she so underpowered because they started their Slayer project too late, and the prototype was promising, but weak? Or was it because the SG Universe Alterians didn't have access to Magic or the demon Essence to augment their technology?

How is Buffy going to react to the arriving Tau'ri? The Slayer is *extremely* territorial! Buffy would certainly see the city and it's contents as *Hers!*. Would Buffy allow a pack of intruders, aliens, to invade her home, and lay claim to her stuff? For that matter, would she allow them to take control of her home and it's contents? Yeah, the Tau'ri are Human, but they're a different species-To Buffy's Spidey senses, will they 'tingle' differently?

Of course, as a pure Alterian, Buffy would have complete control over the city and its defenses. Isolating and imprisoning the Tau'ri in a small section of the city is not out of the question.

Will you have Buffy subjected to a physical? Why should she give them that level of power over her? Besides, they're the strangers in *her* home. Why should she have to satisfy or assure *them* about her Humanity or anything else?

As for relationships . . .Most people forget that Buffy is grieving for Angel, and is not in the mood for a new lover! Maybe the guys would be too awed over the resident Ancient to try anything-Maybe.

Yeah, Buffy's holding the high ground and all the cards.

So many questions, and only one chapter! Please, please, more chapters?
Comments from author:
I swear, a couple of your ideas had me wondering if you broke into my brain for a while. To be honest though, I haven't decided if this is the same dimension as Buffy's old one. May not for a while either. After all, it will take some time for Buffy to trust the intruders with any information about herself.
Review By [ReallyBored] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice start. I'd like to see Buffy get acquainted with this new universe. Not to mention kill a lot of Wraith and meet new and interesting people. Nice for Buffy to have a bit of a reputation with the people in the Pegasus Galaxy before the Tau'ri show up.
Comments from author:
I have an idea of some people for Buffy to some across, but I'm going to be mean and not say until the expedition team finds out...I think.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Emeraldiceus
Review:
Great start, can wait for more! I would like a little back ground first maybe a chapter or two of her learning about the city and planets and then meet the Stargate crew. You can also have some flashbacks of important events.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure, but I think I'll handle it by making vague comments that need to be explained to the SG people when they arrive.
Review By [Emeraldiceus] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from FireFlash
Review:
neat beginning. i look forward to more. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from cjsplace
Review:
I think you need a spanking for starting another story young lady, but and here's a big butt (not mine, it's perky and cute, just ask my hubby *snicker* no, really it is) I will defer your punishment since this story has promise, but damn that pesky critter just sneaks in everywhere, you must pass go without collecting 200 words, and get back to your neglected stories. Now, march, you heard me (stern look, and boy let me tell you that "Willow resolve look" ha has nothing on mine, just ask my son). You heard me scoot, to the the puter with you missy. *kisses and much luck with your muse*
Comments from author:
*pout* I just updated my 'IFMHiSF' story! Plus I'm working on the next chapter for my 'TQoS' fic (getting it typed and editted for the betas). Course, then it's a matter of keeping the stories balanced after that. And keeping the rampant bunnies in my head happy. For every story that I have posted that I'm working on, I have another on my computer started and waiting to be posted. That's where this story and the amnesia story came from. It's the oneshots that I post that spring up out of nowhere and demand to be written immediately.
Review By [cjsplace] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from sunnyfan
Review:
Great so far. I vote you skip ahead to when the stargate people arrive.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I don't want to give away too much ahead of time.
Review By [sunnyfan] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from camura
Review:
learn about the city and planets, some science
Comments from author:
She will, but we - meaning you - won't learn what it is until the SG people arrive.
Review By [camura] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Aeryn
Review:
interesting start, hoping for more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Whichever way you decide to go (letting Buffy take the scenic route to Atlantis, or the express), I look forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
LOL. Glad you like the premise.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Hawkehunt
Review:
I'd suggest skipping ahead. If you go through the whole learning about the galaxy bit now, you'll still have to recap it every time the knowledge is used later anyway. If you skip ahead, you can introduce things as they become relevant, and you don't have to worry about maintaining continuity as much, either.
Comments from author:
You have a good point. I've decided to gloss over some events before having her meet the gang.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from (Past Donor)Emergency
Review:
I'd skip forward. I wanna get straight into the action!!!
Comments from author:
LOL. Too funny, but at least you know what you want.
Review By [(Past Donor)Emergency] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Ramenth
Review:
Very very cool story, though one thing confuses me. If memory serves, Proclarush means 'Lost in Fire'. Wasn't Atlantis on Terra Atlantus, while Taonas was on Proclarush?
Comments from author:
Hmm, I thought it was more like Proclarush = 'Land of...' Therefore Taonas was Land of Fire, and Atlantis was Land of Water. Sorry for the error. Can't figure out how I made that mistake now. It's been too long since I wrote it.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
MWHAHAHAHA

EDIT: But of course I am!!!! *evil cackle*
Comments from author:
You see, reviewers? I told you she was evil! LOL.
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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