Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Making a Home" from Harry
Review:
Well, Buffy has made it to the hidden world of the Ancients. Now, lets see how long till Humans arrive there.
Comments from author:
She'll have company before the SGA folks show up.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from RevDorothyL
Review:
MDP -- nice!
Comments from author:
Why not band together against a greater enemy?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from MarzBar
Review:
Has it been a while since this was updated? I was about to try and search fanfic archives for a tale about Buffy in Atlantis and lo and behold, here it is!! I love this and am looking forward to more. Want to find out about Ronon (drool) and any other hunks that may be included.
Comments from author:
Yup, there'll be a flashback of how Ronon joined Vira and Fred in Atlantis.
Review By [MarzBar] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A New Demon to Kill" from Harry
Review:
Looks like Buffy has found a new place to put her skills to use. Now, lets see how Atlantis finds out about this, and how they put it to use.
Comments from author:
If they try to 'use' Buffy, they're in for a world of disappointment and hurt.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from Oxnate
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from tracysgate
Review:
yiphee... new chapter *\O/* *\O/* *\O/* cheerleaders for you. i wana hear about ronan.... and im assuming teyla is the leader of this group?!? oooo her and shepherd captured together?!?!
great work as usual... cant wait for more though :) pretty pretty please?
Comments from author:
Yup, Teyla and Sheppard were captured together. In one of the next chapters, we'll see how Ronon joined Fred and Buffy.
Review By [tracysgate] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from CageFire
Review:
Great to see a new chapter of this. It's been quite some time. I'm not so hot about all the flashbacks instead of just telling the story in order, but maybe you hadn't come up with it ahead of time? Or maybe you wanted to get to the point where the atlantis expedition showed up.
Comments from author:
I figured that instead of giving spoilers, the audience would have to wait to find out what happened in the previous years.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Checking In" from Gideon
Review:
A Mutual defense pact is a great idea. Wouldn't it only be activated if one of the members was attacked? That is fine I guess if you want to add the Athosians to the Pact.
Comments from author:
I'll try to bring that up in the next chapter.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Confessions and Connections" from Kalliza
Review:
Really like this. I'd like to see how we can get Tayla into the group and such, seeing as how they're not blindly going and looking for somewhere to go. I assume Buffy knows Tayla.
I'm also quite curious about how she met Ronan. Also, I'd of course love for there to be some sort of romance(s) at some point. The idea of Fred/Rodney makes me giggle.
Comments from author:
You may be surprised about who Buffy and her people have met - or haven't met. I will do a flashback to meeting Ronon. First I want to check in on the SGA folks, though.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Confessions and Connections" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my ... this sure is different .... Buffy`s life is not a walk in the park ... can`t wait to read more ^_^
Comments from author:
But her life isn't bad either. Different, sure, but I think she's basically happy.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Confessions and Connections" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Great story. Really well-written, and I like the new twist you've spun. Does this mean that Ronon was never a Runner, or did Buffy/Vira save him early? I look forward to the rest of this story. You're not going to rag on Shep and the others, are you? Thanks for sharing this!
Comments from author:
Guess I can't remember Ronon's backstory that well. I assumed he was running for a couple years when Vira and Fred came across him. I'll write their meeting in a future chapter - just 'cause I think it'd be cool to see it happen. I won't rag on the SGA people anymore than the writers of the show did. Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing though.
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Confessions and Connections" from Vigdis
Review:
I very much enjoy this story. I look forward to seeing more soon.
vladt