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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Kirallie
Review:
Glad Dean helped Sam when he got hit by Jo's emotions. Pity Sam didn't realise Dean was approaching him before he decided to go with Kevin. Poor Dean, does not seem a nice dream but what is it he can't remember?
Comments from author:
They're definitely at least drawing closer *nods* More about the dreams/memory soon!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DoctorAddicted
Review:
I really, really enjoy reading this. I'm a total sucker for Sam/Dean AUs with a twist as well as empath/telepath stories so your fic pushes all my buttons. Also, Dean in a uniform...
*leaves only puddle behind*
Comments from author:
LOL... so very glad to hear it. We were leery of embarking on a sci fi, but it seems to be coming along and people like it, so yay.

Thanks!
Review By [DoctorAddicted] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AmethystSiri
Review:
Wow!!! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch, glad you're enjoying it. It's up!
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MinaLynn
Review:
Oh woe, very powerful end to the chapter! Another excellent update.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Next chappie is up ::grins::
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Kirallie
Review:
If only Dean had allowed him to explain and just when they were startign to get along. Better than the first chapter, felt more natural.
Comments from author:
Heee, yeah, Dean's a hardass! Thanks, glad it feels smoother :)
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [11 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JohannaMK
Review:
Phew! what a dream!

An interesting start :)
Comments from author:
Haha, Sam apparently generates some good dreams in Dean :P

Thank you muchly!
Review By [JohannaMK] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DennSedai
Review:
Very nice twist on the classic Sam/Dean pairing . Futuristic AU's can be a lot of fun
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch. Am hoping to get another chap out by tomorrow night :)
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MinaLynn
Review:
Oh dear Lord I love you two! Seriously! You just keep coming up with more and more great stories! And the picture for thsi is awesome!
Comments from author:
Ha ha... you're so sweet. Glad you are enjoying it. Charlotte made the banner, I think it rocks. More soon :)
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from allaire
Review:
Wow, what a great beginning! I can't wait for the next chapters.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you liked the beginning. Thanks!
Review By [allaire] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Not too bad. Seems to borrow a few ideas from series such a B5 which is fine. It just...doesn't seemt o flow like your other works. It got better towards the end of the chapter but the beginning seemed really forced and almost clinical. The storyline is interesting though
Comments from author:
LOL, we've gotten people saying its like B5, Deep Space Nine and one other one. Probably has elements of all of them *nods*

It's our first attempt at sci fi, the world building has been challenging. Hopefully we get better at it!

Thanks for your thoughts, more soon. *Hugs*
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ophite
Review:
I am so into AU futuristic stories!
Comments from author:
Oh good, you're in the right place then ::grins::
Review By [ophite] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nomadbeth
Review:
Interesting start. And a fun sci-fi tone with a hard lonely Dean. I look forward to where you two go with this.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked the start. This one will have a bit of mystery in it, hope we pull it off ::grins:: More soon.
Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sabinbc
Review:
Intrigued by the begining. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Great to hear you liked the beginning. We'll be posting regularly... so very soon!
Review By [sabinbc] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AmethystSiri
Review:
Interesting beginning :) I will be looking forward to reading more
Comments from author:
yay, wonderful to hear you liked the beginning. *hugs*
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ianquest
Review:
A very interesting start! Obviously influenced by Babylon 5, but I'm pleased to see your Tel Corps is (at least as far as Sam is concerned) rather nicer than the Psi-Corps! If this story is up to the calibre of your usual writing, I'm looking forward to reading more, especially about Sam & Dean's mysterious pasts. Hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Oh you're the second person who mentioned B5! My co-author, who writes Sam and decided he will be a telepath has never seen it!

This is our first sci-fi so the world building aspect has been a bit challenging. We hope we pull it off ::grins::

Thank you for your comments!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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