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A Squib in the Family

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Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from Krysstinia
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Just an idea, use the timeline you wrote for yourself to tell the story. There's really no need for the reader to see it unless you think it's vital to the story. You could've easily told the reader all the information the timeline contains through writing the story.

I like the idea you have, keep it going. Most stories with the Malfoys as family have Buffy as Draco's sister. It manes for a nice twist. I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from mamarhea
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I really like this. Hope to see updates soon.
Review By [mamarhea] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from Lize
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I'm intrigued. Chapter two should be interesting.
Review By [Lize] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from VillageOrchid
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Very interesting. And the time line helped to ease exposition. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. I guess the questions remain - is Giles still alive, and does Buffy have any remaining attachment to her friends from high school.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from gigi
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Interesting start, but check your spelling. You've spelled Dobby's name wrong.
Review By [gigi] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from mithrilandtj
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Interesting start. Can't wait for more.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "A Squib in the Family" from Naurolim
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That looks like it will be an interesting read. I am glad that you have found someone else to be Buffy's real family, makes your story a bit different.

Waiting to read more.
Review By [Naurolim] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
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