Another very good chapter.

There were several spelling errors this time - 'town boarder' instead of 'town border' and 'His will be cared out!' should be 'His will be carried out!', and there were also a couple of grammatical errors, but they were only minor ones.

This chapter was very good. I really liked learning more about Semual, including how he viewed the gang, and the place that they live. I think it will be very interesting when he and Giles talk about the Hellmouth, and Buffy. It will be really interesting to see if he can close the Hellmouth, given that it isn't just a mere rift, although it's size may make it easier too.. I'm also looking forward to his reaction to the planet's location and time. I also look forward to him learning about the Powers and Balance Demons. I can't imagine that would be a good meeting if they ever turned up. *grin*

I really can't wait to see where you take this story. It's awesome so far.

Thanks for the review and pointing out mistakes. I will be the first to admit my grammar sucks, and I write late at night so I miss things sometimes due to my eyes bleeding, lol.

Yes, the Hellmouth, I tried to make the 'rift' a conundrum. It's small but extremely powerful, yet it does not have the presence of a powerful rift.

Ancient Holy Terra, yup! He is going to be quite overwhelmed, what Imperial wouldn't.

I've got a idea in mind for the Balance Demons, no further comments on that. :)

Yup, Holy paladin you're on Terra. Ha! Wonderful.

Great writing and it will be even more interesting when the Watchers and PTB get involved.

I've got an idea about the PTB, but that is a ways away. Thanks for the review!

Definately worthy of recomendation.

Thank you!

Not sure how you will be able to carry on with this story, unless it's about teaching Semuel/Xander about his past and allowing him to become human again.

Perhaps Xander was just changed into another Semuel and the original is still in the future.

Will he attempt to find the God Emperor and prevent the Horus Heresy or is it too far in the future the GEoM would forget till it's too late?

Would Semuel now be known as one of the Fallen?

Perhaps he might end up becoming even more enhanced and have the powers of the Primarchs before going back to the future as Alexander Harris, Inquisitor?


Looking forward to the new chapters.

I have some ideas about The Emperor and Semual. That would not happen until later though. As for Semual becoming a Fallen, no. The Fallen are the members of the Dark Angels who turned to Chaos and were sucked into a Warp storm. Semual would be classified as MIA. The Primarchs, from what I remember are a breed apart from Space Marines. Space Marines have similarities to their Primarchs, but I do not think it's possible for them to become one.

Thanks for the comments!

So there its a circle.....more than likely there its a DAMN fine reason why the Librarian CHIEF of the Dark Angels would be sent into Ancient Holy Terra on the Second Millennium.....Add, that given the massive Psyker gift of Semual, he CAN feel and follow the psychic trail of "The Shaman" what its the nickname that the Emperor itself has on this age. Seems that more than likely Tzeentch its behind this, and the "attack" that hit the Rift, may have been done by a Eldar Force, in order to ensure that Tzeentch's plot would be countered, by sending a appropriate counter to whatever the Ruinous Powers have concocted.

There its also the highly likely chance that we may see HIM, also dragged into Ancient Holy Terra...you know.....a master of firing with Plasma and Bolter pistols, carries the Lion Sword with him, and EVERY and EACH of the Dark Angels-Founded Chapters seeks him throughly Dead?

The Librarian Chief, was Semuals poor use of English. He is a Chief Librarian under Ezekiel Grand Master of Librarians. If this is not possible please let me know and I will edit the chapter to make him a Epistolary. I do have ideas for Semual and The Emperor meeting, nothing concrete though. Remember time travel, Semual may do more harm than good to the future by interfering. Also remember that three of the four Chaos Gods are active at this time...
As for Cypher, dunno about that, could be interesting, but I am currently focusing on how I want Semual to effect the rest of Season 2.

Thanks for the comments!

So will it be Semual/Xander that starts the Empire whom the God-Emperor is emperor of? :-P
Looking good. Thanks for the excellent read.

Not sure yet, I do want Semual/Xander to meet His Holiest God-Emperor though.

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That should be a shock for him :)

Not some backwater world on the rim of the galaxy but Terra a few thousand years in the past...

Now the bit wait for the reaction ^^

Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the review. Yes now it gets complicated, to interfere or not? That is the question. And what about The Emperor, he is alive and wondering the world, what should he do? I don't even have an answer to the last question....yet *cackles

Cracking good update, thanks.

Thanks for the comment!

Awesome stuff. Thanks for the read.

I like this a lot.

It will certainly be very interesting to see where this goes as a 500 year old Librarian, especially one in Terminator Armor, is used to operating in chaos infested worlds, cleansing and purging at will.

I can see lots of options for confrontations given the policies of the Scoobs and the policies of the God-Emperor and the Dark Angels Chapter aren't anywhere close to meshing. And that's once they get over the obvious snafu of taking the relics from him in the first place, and then there is the fact that both Buffy and Angel have a demon inside them.

I'm definitely interested in why he ran. I'm also intrigued on how long it will take Semual to learn English, given the level of intelligence that Librarians have.

Dru's mention of Khorne is also interesting, given that I had assumed that the original warping of the spell was caused by Tzeentch. And it will be very interesting if a Daemon makes it to Sunnydale, as no matter how strong Buffy is, she isn't capable of defeating one.

I REALLY liked how you showed how easy it was for Buffy and Angel to be beaten as well. It was really well written.

Can't wait for more. Awesome stuff.

Thanks for the review, I will say that things will remain complicated between the scoobs and Semual for the forseeable future. Also, don't count out Tzeentch yet, who know what that crazy god of schemes may have planned :)

Interesting start!

The "first" meeting between the Scoobies and Xander is not a good one, i hope he does not kill them before it all can be cleared up...

Keep up the good work!

Thanks! All I can say for the future is that tension will be thick.

(Ork Mode On) So, Xander iz reedy ta kick arse an' take namez fer 'imselph... Goood, let da hummin shows da Slaye' how a Waaagh!! iz made.
Let da Stummping Time Beginz!!!.(Ork Mode Off)
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.

LOL! Thanks for the review!

I for one could do without rehashing all the Ford episode bits line for line. The last part made up for the rest of the chapter though.

Well, I am trying to use the scenes to show some changes that are happening to the world. Changes that have plans to show up again later. I will keep that in mind though, and try to reduce the amount of lines I take from the script. Thanks for the comment!

Sooo Cool. Nice to see a very good 40k cross-over. I can't wait to see more
By the way Holyknight all Librarians have blue Armour to indicate that they are the battle psykers of the Space Marines