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Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very exciting! I particularly liked Buffy's shield-and-hammer fighting technique, and the bit about the magic horsies (it always bothered me ALOT that those horses were able to keep up with an RV racing down the highway, even if the RV couldn't go faster than 50 or 55 mph).
Comments from author:
Well, so did I, but since they had clerics with magic powers, I figured it would make sense if the horses were magical. It wasn't stated (and was probably just a mistake on the creators), so I decided that this was a reasonable explanation.

I'm glad you like it. I hadn't written an action scene for a while, so I'm glad it turned out as well as it did.


Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from Morgomir
Review:
great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from PATM
Review:
If the center is going faster than the outside (as The Roundup does, a State Fair staple)
does that mean this rising intensity a reflection of a very profound conclusion that exceeds
the movies? You can do it. Well described action, spare and informative. Everyone is included
well formed and motivated. I'm thinking I'm over thinking this but Hey! I am enjoying this.
Comments from author:
I am planning on having a pretty awesome ending. I can already picture it in my mind and it's pretty cool. Now if I can just get that picture into writing. I don't know about profound, but cool, I might be able to manage cool.

I've already written the epilogue, but the climax of the story is still to come.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [PATM] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from Mcspender
Review:
Guess Glory is gonna find out very soon how capable is the Special Intervention Unit of the DIS.
Assuming they're the ones tasked to fight supernatural threats in Costa Rica, I mean =).
And thank you for not pulling out the Sunnydale Sindrome, it's quite refreshing =).

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Well, they aren't in Sunnydale and the attackers aren't supernatural, well, except for the really fast horses. There wasn't any reason to pull the wool over anyone's eyes and it just made sense for the Knights to not give a damn about anyone else.

Ah, the UEI, yes, a very capable bunch. However, I wouldn't want to see what would happen should Glory get upset with them, so I'm going to dodge that bullet. Sad to say, with her strength and invulnerability, she is more of a match for them. And anything much stronger would be a danger to anyone near Glory.

But actually, she isn't even on their radar. All she's done is suck some sanity out, but hasn't committed any obvious crimes. Ironic how those who are trying to stop her are actually catching the FP's attention.

I haven't decided who manages the supernatural in Costa Rica. We'll have to see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from janusi
Review:
Oh, that's just epic. Watching the Costa Rican reaction to all this will be as much fun as finding out how the fight itself is going to play out.
Comments from author:
Oh, the Fuerza Publica is plenty capable of taking care of things. I intend to add some more soon enough.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [janusi] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Casual Stroll Through San Jose" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Okay, I know it's wrong of me to focus on the wrong thing here, but it's your fault; you're the one who put Lindsey on a horse. Now all I can do is imagine him riding. What I vaguely remember of the rest of the chapter was good too. Oops, back to my fantasy thoughts.

EDIT: Can he be 'shipped with Buffy? Besides the complete nummy-ness of the two of them together, it would have the added bonus of making Angel's head explode.
Comments from author:
Well, I have it on very good authority that I suck at writing romance, so I don't know. But yes, Lindsey was on a horse.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from PATM
Review:
I suppose this is another Lindsay right? He seems very not evil. Glory wandering around Costa Rica
is an opportunity for Dino chow, Ben is not redeemable.
Comments from author:
Nope, this is the same Lindsey. He's just post evil-hand and already left WR&H. And he was never REALLY evil, just slightly darker grey.

Oh, no Ben is only interested in saving himself, not anyone else.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [PATM] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from grd
Review:
Oh Crap! is the only suitable description for that last part. Time to hide with the dinos? Wonder how Glory would handle a TRex?
Comments from author:
Oh Crap is right. Hiding with Dinos might help, but who knows exactly what is going to happen. Oh, wait, I do.

I'm not giving up any secrets, though.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [grd] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from FireWolfe
Review:
I love this fic. Anya as the CFO I so pity the corporate world lol. You should feed Glory to a T-Rex or have the raptors tear her minions to bits lol. More when you can. Actually it would be cool to feed the council to the dinos too.
Comments from author:
Well, Anya as CFO was something I planned on having from the beginning.

I don't know if a T-Rex could really hurt Glory, but there will be dinosaurs in her future, that much I can tell you.

I won't be feeding the council to the dinosaurs. I have plans, great but terrible plans.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Anya as CFO? Wonderful!

But Anya telling off the overly officious social worker? Priceless!
Comments from author:
It's been a fun little update. I really wanted Anya to be distinctively Anya. Unfortunately, I don't write her much, so it's occasionally harder to get her personality down pat. I think I came close in this one.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Being Unsociable Isn't Always a Bad Thing" from WEMB
Review:
Anya will be perfect as the CFO. Should be interesting to see who else Buffy adds to her company once this little Glory problem is resolved.
Comments from author:
Yeah, It's basically the best job for Anya. She loves money, she's been manipulating wishes for a thousand years and, well, she's Anya.

I'll have to see what's going to happen next. I know BASICALLY what's going to happen, but not the details. I'm not going to give anything away, though.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [WEMB] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Another bloody chase scene...and dinosaurs" from asqwerth
Review:
One of my favourite stories!

I'm glad to see the takeover finally taking place. I'm sure the Buffy dynasty at the corporation will be most... interesting.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. It's been a fun thing to write. As for Buffy in control of InGen..."interesting" is one way of putting it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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