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Review of chapter "Lawyers. Blondes and Money" from FireWolfe
Review:
Oh wow Lindsay as a good guy hell has frozen over. However it be nice to see him redeemed.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Oh, well, he was going in that direction when he left Angel in season 2. And you can't really say he's good; he's still a lawyer. ;)

Thanks for reading!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lawyers. Blondes and Money" from batzulger
Review:
Oh yeah Lindsey's in the mixage! Things can only go horrifically wrong from this point on.
Comments from author:
I like Lindsey. I missed him when he left Angel, so I figured, why not?

Thanks for reading!
Review By [batzulger] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lawyers. Blondes and Money" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Hmm, I am curious to see where this goes. I mean, while Buffy might be able to hold her own against a velociraptor if she has something pointy, a larger predator would probably have a Buffy-snack.
Comments from author:
I'm not even sure if I'm going to have them fight. I kind of want to explore other things instead. But there are possibilities with this. We'll just have to wait and see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lawyers. Blondes and Money" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Intrigued, looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll be posting more.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Incantation, Limited Complexity" from FireWolfe
Review:
Interestnig.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you find it so. I'll have more in the near future.

Thanks for reading.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Incantation, Limited Complexity" from LallaBelle
Review:
A bit disappointed that it wasn't a full chapter, but it's a good line. Although you may want to change it, otherwise a moderator could quarantine the story

Site Rule #5: All stories posted to the site must be at least 100 words per chapter. This does not include the word count of the disclaimer, author's notes or quoted material. This restriction does not apply to fanart.

Added: In a way I think it's one of those things where it sort of works better on paper. Still I am enjoying the story so far, even if I haven't read the books. Seen the movies yes, books no. But I might look into it.
Comments from author:
I really hope they don't. Pretty much every other chapter is going to be plenty long enough, but I wanted these snippets to be a reoccuring theme throughout the story. At this point it doesn't make sense for them to be included into any of the other chapters.

Thanks for the comments. A new chapter will be going up soon.
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Incantation, Limited Complexity" from PATM
Review:
Enjoying this but what is that last chapter? Hammond hired a mage?
Comments from author:
Nope. It's just a little thing that I'm putting in. Have you ever read the books? Crichton uses mathmatical fractals to bring out a point. I'm using an incantation for the same purpose.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Incantation, Limited Complexity" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, that was short. Are you saying dino-recreation might have had some magic mixed up in it? One wonders if someone will try to re-create lost demon species the same way. And hey--check out the old SD high school --lots of "mayor meat" still lying around, probably. heh.
* The falling out between Joyce & her dad must been pretty severe if she never even told the kids about him, or him about the kids...
Comments from author:
No, I'm not saying that. It has more to do with one of the setups in the JP books. I'm just going at it from a different angle.

And yes, the falling out between Joyce and John Hammond was pretty severe. That won't be dealt with for many chapters.

Thanks for reading. More will be posted soon.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Incantation, Limited Complexity" from NeverTooOld
Review:
Was this chapter supposed to be this short? I was looking forward to Ch. 3, but was rather surprised with what was posted.
Comments from author:
It was supposed to be short. People who have read the JP books will understand a little better what I am going for with the short chapter. Don't worry, they won't all be this way.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [NeverTooOld] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lawyers, Magic Shops and Slayers" from AllenPitt
Review:
hm, based on the title, does anyone insist on a DNA test for the Summer's & Dawn turns out not to be one? Or something? Just wondering. I haven't read the book (for shame, I know) only seem the film so this is a bit confusing. But the gist is clear. Mainly--they have relatives. Huh, I wonder if any of the dinos are actually demons or anything weird like that? One wonders how long any of 'em would last in Sunnydale, heh.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm not one to really give things away that fast. But I'll find some kind of explanation for it. The name is actually pretty poor. I didn't have one in mind, so I had to make one up on the spot when I posted it. I think it will fit, but we'll have to see.

You really should read the book. You really, really should. I'll just give you one hint, the monsters aren't the dinosaurs like in the movie.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lawyers, Magic Shops and Slayers" from ArjaiH
Review:
Please continue this is gettibg very good...strangely compelling. Buffy and dinosaurs hmmm.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I wanted to go a different direction from where most JP/Buffy fics go. It's a more political and scientific fic than most, rather than a monster story. It's not all serious, there are going to be fun parts too.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lawyers, Magic Shops and Slayers" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lawyers, Magic Shops and Slayers" from AngusH
Review:
Great start, most unexpected crossover, but it's looking very good.

I'm most interested to see what happens next and what they make of the dinosaurs...
Comments from author:
I'll be honest, I'm not going to hit you with dinosaurs for a long time. We all know the dinos are there, so why just tail swipe you with them? This is going to be a bit different and I want it to go along more with the themes of the books rather than the movies.

Although Ludlow is in it. Because Peter Ludlow is an awesomely horrible person.


Thanks for reading and commenting!
Review By [AngusH] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lawyers, Magic Shops and Slayers" from ColdFuzzions
Review:
Interesting.

I hope to see more of this.

Just curious where it would go if some of the backers of the Initative got involved. Jurassic Park Raptors hunting Demons?

Would a Dinosaur fear the Slayer Spirit?

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
There is more. I've got a fair amount written and I'm just posting a scene at a time instead of posting massive chapters like my other major fic. As for the rest, we'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [ColdFuzzions] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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