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Review of chapter "Alive" from SAK
Review:
What is Buffys Bankai like?

Please update again soon.
Review By [SAK] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from Hawkehunt
Review:
Very cool
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from Aisys
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Alive is a good second chapter, a bit more fragmented though. I'm not really into drabbles but that is personal preference as I prefer a continuous flow of narrative.

These fragments are useful in portraying the different outlooks outside Amaya's view, which is refreshing.

Oh noes, Byakuya-bo is captivated by Amaya, poor kid.
Review By [Aisys] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Aisys
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Just the best bleach xover I've read and by far my favourite verse after reading all your stories.

I can't wait for the 3rd installment where we meet the characters we know ane love.

Just thinking about how Byakuya will handle Amaya's appearance again just makes the anticipation worse.

Conatant incorrect use of loosing is the only grammar issue I see. In your context, use "losing". Loose means lax, lose is to fail
Review By [Aisys] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from Oblivion
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Brilliant! The plot that your creating is so enthralling that I can barely wait for more :) The idea of having Byakuya in love and engaged to Buffy had me grinning from ear to ear! I hope that Buffy doesn't to anything too rash to Willow for pulling her from Soul Society.
Review By [Oblivion] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from cupquake
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this story is awesome! i can't wait to read more and see where all this is going!!!
Review By [cupquake] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from Shadohime
Review:
One minor note here: If you were trying to reference Nanao in Kasumi, you went about it the wrong way. Nanao's name is Ise Nanao in the Japanese style. So Kasumi should be Ise Kasumi, not Nanao Kasumi. Not trying to bug you or anything, but just a heads-up.

So, Buffy just got torn out of the afterlife, eh? Moving on to next story to find out more.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from eclecticcollect
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This was a fantastic read. I love a good long and involved crossover, so I can't wait for the next one. I also really want to see the effects that Buffy/Amaya being pulled out have on all the people she is attached to in soul society.
Review By [eclecticcollect] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from Nightscream
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OH MY FREAKIN' GOD!!! This was great! I can't wait for the next installment in the series...I do hope you finish your Watching Forever fic though. :)
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from Hecatonchires
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Nice and bleachy
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from batzulger
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Beautifully done. Looking forward to the next part.

Now I have to finish Second String....
Review By [batzulger] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from Shawn
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I was wondering how you were going to remove her before the events of Bleach. Awesome!
Review By [Shawn] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alive" from ShadowMaster
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TRULY GREAT!!

I LOVED this fanfic!! Great laughs! Great drama! Great Action!

You have me waiting with baited breath for the next installment. I can't wait to see how much Buffy remembers once she gets over digging herself out of her grave. Will she remember Soul Society or not? Will she still have her Zanpakuto? These are the things I would like to know!

About all I'd like, assuming you haven't written this part up yet, is PLEASE have Xander wind up paired romantically with one of the ladies from the Bleach cast. I know that pretty much from Buffy's resurrection until the end of the series he's with Anya but I would just like to see how big a bang you could get having him hook up with a Shinigami or maybe even Shiba Kukaku. Plus I've always been of the opinion that part of writing a crossover is having cast members of one show get into romantic relationships with members of the other show.

In any case keep up the good work!! C YA!!
Review By [ShadowMaster] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from lunargoddess
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Oh!Oh!Oh! I love it! More please. Please? This is amazing! I cannot wait to read what happens next. I eagerly await the next chapter!
Review By [lunargoddess] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alive" from Alcolico
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Very nice story jezaeiri, I eagerly await the sequel!

However I am wondering if Buffy is going to remain a shinigami or not.
Review By [Alcolico] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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