That was really tremendous! I really like the interactions with all the characters. Like many, I'm wondering what time period this is set in, especially as the 8th's lieutenant. I can't wait for the next chapter!
At first, ya know, i was quite mad at ya... You didn't even finish " Fountain of youth" and "Watching forever" and you started a new story!!! Then i read it, then i began nodding, ya know, this is one hell of a story.
Love ya style of writing! And cool story idea and banner! - winks -
Review By [Millaros] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is a masterpiece in the making, and you would be a fool not to continue it. Keep up the excellent work!
A question: This obviously takes place when Nanao isn't the lieutenant of the 8th division, but when, exactly, is it? Is it during the period where Lisa had left due to becoming a Visored, but before Nanao was old enough to join? Or is this long after the Winter War, and Nanao was a casualty? Also, will there be appearances from the Karakura cast? Please let me know!
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
For your first Bleach story you've done a wonderful job, you were able to integrate Buffy into Soul Society and into the Gotei 13 in a way that made sense, and the dual sword thing is just cool.
Review By [foreverdead] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Must. Update. QUICKLY! I SERIOUSLY enjoyed this one >:). While some people might think she was learning too fast, considering her Slayer's aptitudes with warcraft, I can see how it would be possible.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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