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Review of chapter "Awake" from rhiowen
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I love it so far (im a big fan of buffy and bleach), very well written and i think the characters arent oc :). i like the details and how the storys progressing, no rushing us with loads of facts and plot to quickly (i hate that in a story). i hope you update soon :D. P.s. i loooove long long stories so i hope you dont give up.
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from Shawn
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That was really tremendous! I really like the interactions with all the characters. Like many, I'm wondering what time period this is set in, especially as the 8th's lieutenant. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you!

Shawn
Review By [Shawn] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from hangmansgirl
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Gaaa....why must you put out stories that are addicting...I love this story...i can't wait for more...please??.

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Review By [hangmansgirl] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Millaros
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At first, ya know, i was quite mad at ya... You didn't even finish " Fountain of youth" and "Watching forever" and you started a new story!!! Then i read it, then i began nodding, ya know, this is one hell of a story.

Love ya style of writing! And cool story idea and banner! - winks -
Review By [Millaros] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Shadohime
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Ho. Ly. Heck. That's all I'm saying.

This is a masterpiece in the making, and you would be a fool not to continue it. Keep up the excellent work!

A question: This obviously takes place when Nanao isn't the lieutenant of the 8th division, but when, exactly, is it? Is it during the period where Lisa had left due to becoming a Visored, but before Nanao was old enough to join? Or is this long after the Winter War, and Nanao was a casualty? Also, will there be appearances from the Karakura cast? Please let me know!
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from foreverdead
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For your first Bleach story you've done a wonderful job, you were able to integrate Buffy into Soul Society and into the Gotei 13 in a way that made sense, and the dual sword thing is just cool.
Review By [foreverdead] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from Oblivion
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I love this story and the way you've put Buffy into the Bleach world so seamlessly. I do wonder how long before the events of the animé you've set it as it seems to be well before the events of 110 years prior to the animé? I look forward to reading the next chapter soon :)
Review By [Oblivion] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from (Recent Donor)tammin
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Please continue this story. You appear to have done your homework and I would like to see what you can do with the rest of the story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Alcolico
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Liked the story so far, it is quite promising and i am rather eager to read it further!
Review By [Alcolico] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Guardian
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Amazingly good first chapter. Keep 'em coming.
Review By [Guardian] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Discord
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Most excellent! I am very very excited to read the next part!
Review By [Discord] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from Ramenth
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Now that was good.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from batzulger
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Awesome!
Review By [batzulger] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awake" from Iceflame
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Must. Update. QUICKLY! I SERIOUSLY enjoyed this one >:). While some people might think she was learning too fast, considering her Slayer's aptitudes with warcraft, I can see how it would be possible.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awake" from Aglaranna
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YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!

I cannot tell you how much I love this story! I am so happy to see that it's done! More! More! More! Please!
Review By [Aglaranna] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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