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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yes, please let there be a next! How will Nya arrange for Buffy to dress up in that gown for Halloween without her growing affection for Angel to spur her on? And if Buffy picks another costume this time, does that mean that (like Spock Prime in the recent Star Trek movie) Buffy/Darla/Nya has created an alternate universe with a whole new timeline branching off from her awakening in Galway? Or will Nya disappear in a paradox, if Buffy doesn't dress like that?
Comments from author:
Hmmm, hadn't considered the dress issue. I'll try to take care of it in the next chapter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from MrRigger
Review:
Pretty good. The only problem was where you had Buffy enjoy speaking with Franklin. While he is largely remembered as a statesman and inventor, he was also one of the biggest perverts and womanizers around. To put it in perspective, after Franklin returned to the States from his time in France as an ambassador, he had contracted every STD known to medical science at the time. I doubt Buffy would have enjoyed speaking with him while being hit on constantly, while being disparaged due to being a woman. Not to say that her tastes haven't changed over the years, but it doesn't make sense to me.

MrRigger
Comments from author:
I'm choosing to think that he wasn't a rapist as well, and if Nya said no - and meant it - Franklin would back off, reluctantly willing to just talk to her. He had so many great quotes that I needed to have him in there, too.
Review By [MrRigger] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from AvtarAngel
Review:
this is an interesting twist
hopefully there shall be more to come
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [AvtarAngel] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from Crayshack
Review:
The should most definitly be a next.
Comments from author:
LOL. Writing it now.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from VillageOrchid
Review:
While Buffy may have rewritten some of the future foes that she might have faced (but didn't know yet), there will be foes to face after halloween... and no intel. She's best staying with Giles, Xander and Willlow and making sure that they survive to leave the hellmouth. Perhaps she'd even learn a spell to make her look like Buffy to her mother?
Comments from author:
There's another Slayer who can take over the Hellmouth, and maybe with the Scoobies helping Kendra, she can last longer. After almost 250 years, Nya is not the same girl who first wore the costume and went back in time. It would only hurt everyone to try and make her be Buffy again.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Kind of sad she didn't meet up with Holtz but since there was no Angel I guess vengence never became his agenda. Also surprised that the first isn't intervening a bit earlier seeing that Buffy is changing a few things for the good. Very Interesting story and can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
She's not exactly a Slayer anymore; she's become something entirely different. And since the forces of good weren't responsible for *making* it happen, the First is still bound by the rules.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Making Choices" from grd
Review:
Really loved how Buffy's statements were paraphrased in history. Please more of her missadventurers in the past. Did she ever meet up with Holtz?
Comments from author:
Nah, but she will meet another man whose family was killed by vampires and wants revenge. *evil hint*
Review By [grd] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from spk
Review:
WOW! In awe of your story idea. Can't wait to see the changes she makes. :)
Comments from author:
Hope you like what comes next.
Review By [spk] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapter.

Don't forget about the American and the French revolutions as they are only a couple of decades ahead of the time period Buffy landed in.

::Gives the plot bunny some Beef noodle soup::

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You cannot make a man by standing a sheep on
its hind legs. But by standing a flock of sheep in
that position you can make a crowd of men.
- Max Beerbohm
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Comments from author:
Yikes! It's like you're reading my mind!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from SassyFrass
Review:
Very entertaining so far.
Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from (Past Donor)Glendon
Review:
Interesting concept here. I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to history as it unfolds (I assume Buffy working her way back to the "present" is how you plan to do this), and looks like it will be a fun read. I don't have a problem believing how you have Buffy setup as a Day Walker. It works for the story. Makes sense that the slayer essense would suppress the thirst. If Willow had been in Buffy's place she would have probably been exactly like Blade, but Buffy being the current Slayer has a get out of the grossness free card. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
There won't be a lot of interaction between Buffy and human history, since I don't want her stopping WWI or anything. There'll be a few scenes of her with the supernatural history though.
Review By [(Past Donor)Glendon] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from PATM
Review:
A dhamphir then, her slayer affected the demon and her human flesh in a profound way.Liam
is still not turned and an utter loss to humanity.The first chapter is a very intriguing beginning
and this chapter good followup. More please. Spell check did not come up with a correction for
the second word of this review so I'll just leave it as is.
Comments from author:
Hey! I like the way you described what happened to her. Thanks. I was thinking of Blade when I came up with Buffy's new existence, but shuddered at the idea of her drinking blood so I used my powers as 'Author Goddess' to take away the bloodlust.
Review By [PATM] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Totally loving this and can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked this update but I'm a little confused. Buffy/Darla is alive? She can go out in the sun, eat food, touch holy items, and doesn't like blood? But she doesn't have a reflection? So is she a vamp or not? And is she vamp strong or Slayer strong? I look forward to reading more of your story so we find out what is really going on. Lol!
Comments from author:
Check out PATM's review; they nailed the explanation pretty good. She's a combination of both a vamp and a Slayer, but her inner drive to protect humanity keeps her from having any of the evil attributes of a vamp. Hope that clears it up.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
OOOH that's an interesting take on the holloween episode, I like it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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