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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool alterations. No reflection... can eat food. Maybe have to have something with animal protein or blood in it... holly objects not effecting...
Comments from author:
You could have a point with the animal protein/blood thing. She's more Slayer than vampire, so no evilness happening.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from ReallyBored
Review:
Buffy's changing history-But what about Connor? Darla and Angel's son? Wasn't he suppose to kill Sahjhan? Does he still get born? And Daniel Holtz . . .what happens there?

Does Buffy ever goes back to being just Buffy the Vampire Slayer? Still, even if you decide not to restore Buffy to her original state, at least, you kept her from becoming a monster!

Please write more and soon. Your stories about Buffy in weird and unusual places and situations are always fun!
Comments from author:
Unless there's another vampire that kills Holtz's family, he's a non-issue. But you did give me an idea about Sahjhan. If I can figure out how to use it, thanks. Buffy is Nya now; she won't be turning back.

Thanks. There'll be another fic (oneshot) Halloween day about a strange effect the spell caused in another dimension.
Review By [ReallyBored] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Becoming a New Woman" from NeverTooOld
Review:
Well, that was quick. I like how it seems that her being the Slayer overrides Darla's Vampiric body. Or at any rate, thats what it seems like. I only wonder if her body is alive, or if instead of being animated by the essence of a demon, if it is animated by the essence of the Slayer. Magic is pretty wonderful, isn't it?
Jon
Comments from author:
Hmm. PATM called 'Nya' a dhampir, so however they show up - alive or dead - is probably what I'm going for with her. I was thinking of an altered version of Blade at the time. I just didn't like her having the bloodlust. And you're right; it was the Slayer that kept her from fully becoming Darla. I love magick for changing things.
Review By [NeverTooOld] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from NeverTooOld
Review:
Excellent choice for YAHF. Clearly, Buffy is still herself, she may be a vampire, but she is clearly motivated to act as a Slayer. I hope to see Buffy in action personally, now that she has gone past the point of spell activation.
Keep up the good work.
Jon
Comments from author:
There'll be a couple chapters recalling the big moments that Buffy changed. Be posting one soon.
Review By [NeverTooOld] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from Dragonelf
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More soon, please.

::Gives the plot bunny some Beef noodle soup::

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its hind legs. But by standing a flock of sheep in
that position you can make a crowd of men.
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Comments from author:
Hope you enjoy my little surpise coming.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from Thedruid
Review:
Uh, interesting start. But what is with the books? The way you write it seems to be that each 'glowing book' holds the details of both before the timeline was changed and after it was changed, not one or the other as it seems to be with their memories. And can you make it clear which time-line is domnintant? Do they see how it was before Buffy chaged the past and think that is their time line, or do they think they always exsisted in the time-line Buffy created?
Comments from author:
It took a little while for the changes to affect Giles and the Scoobies. What they now remember is the altered timeline, the books have what 'should' have happened if Buffy hadn't changed things. Hopefully it will be a little clearer when you see it from Buffy's side.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from Aeryn
Review:
dreadfully boring fic - ok so I'm lying. Liked the idea of Buffy changing this history.
Comments from author:
Wow, my feelings were almost hurt for the first few words. Glad you were just teasing.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from Carojen
Review:
This looks really interesting. Too bad that the Scoobies are jumping to conclusions in the end...
Comments from author:
I assume you're talking about Jenny. It's just the result of suspicious minds.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Oh wow! Yay for Redemption!Drusilla! Great start and I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.

CT.
Comments from author:
Dru is the vampire of the Scourge I most want to redeem. Both Darla and Liam were human wastes of space, and...I don't know, William just struck me as a wuss. Dru had a gift and was frightened by it; she should have had the chance to use it for good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. Talk about time ripples. There's no telling how much damage has been caused by Buffy's actions. Bad people, as well as good people lived who once died. Hopefully Druscilla was able to minimize the damage.
Comments from author:
I'm not going to delve too much on normal human history, since I'm of the opinion it wouldn't have been altered too, too much by supernatural events. Most of what Buffy's done has altered the supernatural history somewhat. There's always another bad guy to take the last one's place - like Kakistos and the Master. The important thing was not changing Buffy's personal history.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from Tempi
Review:
Very intriguing. I hope you have plans and ideas for many chapters. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Not too many chapters. This is just a Halloween fic. Hopefully you'll like the changes I've made to BtVS canon.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from CPTSkip
Review:
Time travel stories always make my head hurt. I look forward to seeing what is going on from Buffy's POV. Or should that be Darla's POV? See? Head hurting now. I was glad to read Dru didn't get Turned and she joined the CoWs.
Comments from author:
LOL. Get ready for more pain in the next chapter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Fascinating.
Comments from author:
Thanks?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting idea. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Glad you found it interesting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Tracking the Changes" from AllenPitt
Review:
So...now there's no Angel, but vamp-Buffy was in the background sending anonymous notes, and is probably going to reveal herself to them soon? Does she 'look' like Buffy still, or does she look like Darla? Weird idea, --good, too.
Comments from author:
Sadly, she is Darla's body now. At least she's still a blonde though.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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