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Dawn Summers and the Octopuses from Mars.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
With that title, all I can say is it's a good thing it isn't anime!
Comments from author:
Oh yes, I'd not thought of that...ooo-er.

DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Always glad to see another one of your stories. But, it should be "Octopi from Mars."

EDIT: Actually, it appears that both are correct. Learn something new day...

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/octopus
Comments from author:
I think you'll find that Octopus is a Greek word so the plural ends in 's'. If it was a Latin word it would end in 'i'. At least that's what I've been told.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from PATM
Review:
The octopies from Mars? 15 chapters 2500 word per is challenge I for one am willing to read!
Gurn? wouldn't it be BUUN?! Kidding.The Dawn Giles interplay,funny, it reminds me of a bit
of dialog from Flubber movie the 60's version.
Comments from author:
Gods, I remember that movie from when I was about 7 or eight, even went to the pictures to see it.

Buun/gurn? It's done for comic effect for chap 2.

DaveT.
Review By [PATM] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from Mcspender
Review:
Who sent Dawn to the past? And how come the invasion was so quickly forgotten??.
Cool, and intriguing chapter.
See ya!!
Comments from author:
All questions will be answered (unless I forgot something) by the end of the story.

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from AllenPitt
Review:
Nice to know she's learned enough magic not to be helpless... and boy will the slayer & watcher be surprised to find out she knows all about them & their work. Not sure what use she'll be against a Martian invasion. Suggesting that everyone sneeze on the invaders might not go over well. Interesting timing, 1898 is when Angelus go this soul... but he'd be in Romania then.
Comments from author:
On its so much more complicated than that...who are these Martians anyway?

DaveT.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one, he said....
Jeff Wayne, after Wells

Million to one shots come off nine times out of ten
Pratchett
Comments from author:
You're not wrong.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from CPTSkip
Review:
Now this looks interesting. I always loved the Martian Tripods. The best ones were in the Classic Illustrated comic books, Glad to see another of your lovely little stories. Poor time traveling Dawn. And Xander thought he was the universe's butt monkey. Lol!
Comments from author:
I only realized after posting Chap 1 that, in general, no one notices that she's been anywere! Have to do something about that.

DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One." from JoeDineen
Review:
That box still causing trouble? Looks like Dawn could have a future writing really realistic historical romances.
Comments from author:
It'd be safer than working in Giles' library.

DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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