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Review of chapter "Mysticism" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
The scene where Castiel was watching porn was very funny ^_^ And I loved the scene with Lisa and Dawn, especially the foreshadowing which makes me think that Buffy is still going to be coming back from the grave.

"Yes, she would live. She didn't know what she had to live for but she would live."

^^ Loved that line most of all.

Will be waiting for the next chapter.
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mysticism" from Shulik
Review:
Very, very funny!
Awesomely done, thank yoU!
Review By [Shulik] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Help With the God Hunt" from ArinnaBlack
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Now, I'm even more interested. I gotta ask though, is Dawn still going to be the same age as she was in canon? If I remember correctly, she was either 14 or 15 in early Season 6 and I can go with the kink but a Castiel/Dawn pairing when she's that young squicks me just a bit.

Anyways, good work. ^_^ And don't be surprised that people read this and like it. It's so hard to find Castiel HET that isn't complete rubbish, you know?

EDIT: Good, but you may want to put an author's note in your first chapter saying that you're changing Dawn's age. Otherwise, people will assume that she is 14 since this is set in Buffy season 6.
Comments from author:
Well, it kind of weirds me out too, so I always shift her age at least one year in my stories. My other Dawn fic takes place in season 5 and instead of 14 I made her 15, so in this one she's sixteen... and when you think about it... How old was Buffy when she got with Angel? :D

And I'm glad you like it. Hopefully chapter 3 will be out later tonight... There's going to be a party and since I'm likely to be the only one NOT boozing I'm going to be working on this.

And yes... it IS hard to find Castiel HET... good Castiel het at that. I hope mine is at least decent. ^.^ Thanks again
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Help With the God Hunt" from banner
Review:
This is a truly different and interesting concept. I'm loving the possibilities.
Review By [banner] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Help With the God Hunt" from AllenPitt
Review:
I can just see Dawn saying "I'll help you, but you have to bring Buffy back first!"... also I bet Castiel would be real surprised to find the Key is now in human form... and protected by a vampire. of a type Sam/Dean aren't familiar with.
Comments from author:
Lol, yes... it's going to be rather amusing when Dean and Sam figure out most vampire lore ISN'T bullcrap. :D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Missing" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
I like Dawn fics and this pairing has me interested enough to start tracking. Hope to read more soon :)
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missing" from FaithLestrange
Review:
I'm not usually a fan of Dawn stories, but you have me intrigued. Plus I love Cas. I look forward to your next chapter. :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad I've caught your attention. :) I certainly hope I can keep it and the next chapter should be up within the next couple of days. :D I think the main reason people aren't Dawn fans is because of the bratiness until she grows up more in season seven... Just to warn you, this is season six Dawn but hopefully she won't be as chokable here... for various reasons... >.> I'm shutting up now.
Review By [FaithLestrange] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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