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Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from spk
Review:
Oh, I so hope someone wants to pick this up. I LOVE the way you wrote this from Gibbs' pov. Amazing descriptions. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from UrbanGhost
Review:
I like it, I would love to see more of this!

-- UrbanGhost
Review By [UrbanGhost] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from slmncpm
Review:
this is fantastic.. can i beg for you to continue it? i know it would be fantastic if you did so! *hands over scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Wildecate
Review:
I enjoyed this story right up until you named Dawn. I appreciate artistic licence etc but Dawn's eyes are blue -end of story, that pretty much killed it for me - but the premise, the language, the character sleight of hand that you pulled were all of the good.
Comments from author:
Are in the series, yes. You are assuming that nothing happened to change that. While I am assuming, here, that something did; given the POV of the story the opportunity did not arise to actually discuss it.
Review By [Wildecate] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Crayshack
Review:
Crossover not realy a suprise, I mean, it is TtH.
Comments from author:
Surprise as to which character I used, though. Hence why it's listed as a "general" story as well.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from SarahLou
Review:
Great little story - there gonna be a sequel? Hope to read more soon :-)

Sarah x
Comments from author:
I wasn't planning one, but perhaps I'll come up with a suitable plot...
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Greywizard
Review:
Nice.

My only criticism is that when I was reading the story I thought that you were describing Willow, since she has green eyes, and we also know that Gibbs is partial to redheads. Dawn's eyes are most definitely blue, not green.

Other than that, this is a nice story.
Comments from author:
Artistic license - since we don't know what happened in the meantime and the Key has been described as green, I decided that maybe Dawn's are green now. And I never mentioned the hair - partially for that reason. If I was using a redhead, I'm guessing Gibbs would have made some effort to escalate things in a romantic direction.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Ailisande
Review:
I like it. My only complaint is that I thought Dawnie had blue eyes, not green, and I got really confused at the reveal. But I quite enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
She did, but she's also made out of green magic, so that could easily have changed.
Review By [Ailisande] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from andiesimmo
Review:
thank you for this i really enjoyed it and would be extra happy if there were to be more (hint hint!!!)
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green Goddess" from Clandestine
Review:
You make me wish for a sequel. LOL. Very nice one shot. Good job!
Comments from author:
I know... that ending was sort of cliffhanger-ish, wasn't it?

Perhaps I'll come up with a plot and we'll have a story.
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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