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Review of chapter "Retaliation" from darkerxangel
This is excellent I love doom as godfather he's just protecting his goddaughter huh? Cool, the way you had the scobbies captured so easily was masterful and shows a good understanding of all the characters involved
Review By [darkerxangel] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awakening" from texaswookie
Wishing for another update of this fine tale. I do have a couple of questions though. Did you just kill Oz? Because you gathered everyone but our favorite werewolf. Hopefully you just forgot to mention him. I can totally see him playing his guitar while a doombot is flying/carrying his van. It would be interesting to see how Doom treats the group seeing how of all of the ones that know Buffy Graham and Oz are the ones that probably didn't betray her. I also find it odd though that Doom didn't have anything pillaged though. I'm hoping that's why there were two doombots with Giles one to collect him the other to collect his library. Okay my cquestions are done hope to see an update on this sometime.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from Raider
very cool.

the thought of doom as godfather to buffy, for some reason, feels right.

more please!
Review By [Raider] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from YourDoomed
lol...that was so funny! I love this Doom...really you should update soon mein friend
Review By [YourDoomed] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from kspuffyk
please please please update this story.

Is there any pairings?
Review By [kspuffyk] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from Markelo
Pretty good story. And I bet the next slayer is Kendra!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from JTM

I'm hoping Kitty Pryde gets the slayer essence. Depending on when you set this Kitty could have some impressive ninja skills, plus training from Wolverine. At one point she was even using a hand weapon modeled on Wolverine's claws. Her new predatory instincts would be fun. Now imagine X-23 as her hunting buddy.

What are the 7 points? I'm stumped. Are they other countries with ICBMs? Or maybe other hellmouths?

I liked how easily Dr.Doom captured everyone, including Willow. The way I see it, Willow has Incredible potential, but it's just that, potential. She has done some things that a novice witch like her shouldn't be able to do, but that doesn't mean she is in Doom's league. She has a tremendous amount of raw untrained power, but she lacks skill and understanding. She uses brute force to achieve the effects she wants, like using a flame thrower to light a candle, only I honestly don't think she realizes what she is doing. Tara was the closest she ever had to a real teacher, but she wasn't much more that a novice herself. Giles made no apparent attempt to find her a teacher, we know he had connections other than the council. I really think a good teacher would have averted so many problems.

I hope your not going to be to hard on the scoobies. It's easy for us to look back and say "how could they" but I think the resurrection spell was a honest, well intentioned, mistake on their part. But if you are going to come down hard on them don't forget Giles. People seem to let him off almost as much as Xander. Who am I kidding, no one gets away with almost as much as Xander.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I was hoping someone would recognize the fact that Doom is one of the greatest Marvel villains of all time. I have to admit that Kitty is looking like a good choice for the new Slayer in the Marvel Universe.

The seven points that Doom attacks are the seven Hellmouths on the Buffyverse's Earth. Imagine how much destruction is being incurred because of every one of the Hellmouths is hit by every nuclear missile in existence.

I'm glad you see my point about how easily Doom captured everyone and I'm glad that you didn't hark on me about Willow being outclassed. With the proper training, Willow could outclass Doom but at this point she won't.

I won't be hard on the Scoobies though I'm piecing together a few scenes that might seem harsh.
Review By [JTM] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from SamDragon
Storm ,please she would be a great slayer.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from grd
I so love Godfather Doom!!! So many presents he has collected for Lizzy. I wonder if Doom will make the Buffyverse the reality he rules and saves. He would be better than the PTBs. Wonder what Doom would do to the First.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from Wise
This story needs work. Right now, I'm not actually convinced by the majority of the characterizations. Doom's, maybe. It seems like you're rushing through scenes and events that you should savor, though. Don't cheat on character development, dude. It's not doing your story any favors.
Review By [Wise] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from AllenPitt
Gee, even though Doom did it, the FF are going to have to live with the knowledge that saving their daughter killed 6 billion+ people. Ouch.
As to the X-(wo)man that becomes a slayer... that's not something I'd wish on anybody... ie she'll become a demon magnet, vampires etc will seek her out, there's no way to ever retire except by dying, and all that. Choices... I suppose Kitty Pryde if she's still there --slayer plus intangibility would be neat...
Comments from author:
Like they don't have enough blood on their hands, Reed let Galactus go.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from deathgeonous
No, I don't think I want to guess. anyways, fun fic, thanks for writing this, bye for now. Oh, and I never thought I'd say this either, WAY TO GO DOOM!!! YEAH! RIGHT ON! YAY DOOM!!! GIVE THOSE STINKY PTB WHAT FOR!!! YAY DOOM!!!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from JediKnight
Great job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more soon.

-Did you send the Slayer Essence into Jean?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from vaguilera
love it. have been waiting patiently and shall continue so. I love Doom and his twisted views. poor whistler though what will he do with the hat he already has. as fer the slayer essence i'm thinking Kitty Pryde 'Shadowcat' for some reason i'm thinking her. maybe the whole connection she has with Buffy's character. keep it up.
Review By [vaguilera] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retaliation" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Love it! as for the new slayer ummm rogue would be neat. :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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