Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gonadius
No clue what the cross-over was, which made much of the story unintelligable. And yet... With switching a few phrases, it could work with those who haven't a clue. Very well written regardless.
The one part I found the most... Amusing was this: "On long-term missions, doctors tested the local pants and animals". Its so outragously out of place, its sublime. "Hmmm, we're exploring a strange, new world. We're savages, lets check for STD's"...
Review By [Gonadius
] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Speakertocustomers
I can't read the story. It's dark blue text on a black background and I simply can't make out the words. I don't know how you've done that as every other story on the site shows up to me in the black text on cream that is my chosen colour scheme.
The summary is interesting but until you do something about the layout I won't be able to read it.
Comments from author:
I have no idea. It doesn't look like that when I open it on my machine. Try opening it in a word processing program and adjusting the colors there.
Review By [Speakertocustomers
] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TonyTheJew
This story really show what a SG team can do to a world with out know what they are doing.
So are you going to write more? if so thank you.
Review By [TonyTheJew
] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written story but I have no clue about the crossover.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]