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Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from darkwoofe
Review:
Great stuff so far! I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for more. I'm more of a buffy/sam dawn/cassie fan, but I'm enjoying this anyway. Nicely done!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from Luhh
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Goddess, you write REALLY WELL!!!
I mean, i already track some of your OTHER stories (That i am STILL waiting for you to resume your writing!!!!) but this one is REALLY FUNNY!!!!
When are you gonna post another chapter? I mean, there has been TWO MONTHS since you writed this one. WE ARE WAITING, YOU KNOW???

Well, anyhow, PLEASE write SOON!

;*

PS: Sorry about anything write the wrong way, im brazilian and i am still learning how to spell averything right =P
Review By [Luhh] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from Dapsy
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This story is just... fun :D
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from Dragonelf
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This story looks interesting so far and I hope we will see you inspired to add more to it soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a bowl of Borscht::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from caradens
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really enjoying this story eager for more great update
Review By [caradens] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from Geyer
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Excellent story! There were too many things I loved to mention them all here, so I'll just thank you for writing such a twisty and funny story combining my two favorite fandoms. Despite the unlikely events, the characterizations fit. Buffy and Dawn explaining to Giles, with Faith as both audience and participant, was great. The snark from all characters seems perfect. I'm looking forward to more as the two worlds collide.

And now I wish somebody would write Dawn Carter of Mars. Maybe...Buffy as the Warlord, Dawn as Carthoris, and Sam as Thuvia? My brain hurts. (Too much Helium.)
Comments from author:
Hmm.... that never occurred to me. It's been years (25+) since I read any of those books. Thanks for the plot bunny :-)
Review By [Geyer] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from CPTSkip
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I just reread your delightfully wacky story. In spite of the rather kinky twists, I find your characterization to be quite nice and amazingly close to canon in both universes. Your story is actually quite romantic, again, of course, in an oddly twisted way. Lol! And, also in spite of your claiming this is a "WP" story, your logic is quite good in explaining the relations between the various members of the Slayer Clan. I so look forward to Xander and Willow meeting the Summers' ladies' wives. Both are going to freak. Lol!

If Buffy is a Lieutenant Commander, RNR she and her wife are of equal rank. I just hope they get promoted together. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments :-).

While only a minor plot point, the equal rank is intentional. Though, as Buffy says, it's more of a James Bond-ish cover than a real rank. And Buffy will be making use of it in a/several future episodes in this story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from KnightWulf
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love the new chappy hope to read more soon
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from purrfus
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I was reading this in the break room - the laughing out loud scared a few people.

The slayer relationships and the explanations are excellent.
Comments from author:
Sorry, I'll try to keep it down in the next part :-).
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from zafaran
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Woo-hoo! We got a new chapter. Yes! I like this story, and I hope your muse keeps going on it for a long, long time. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from fanrei
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i really really like this story. i like the queen slayer and especially the Sis-mom part. not many author take in consideration that dawn was created from Buffy and not Joyce. and of course Janet is always a good character to play with.
thank you for sharing.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from AllenPitt
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and the funny thing is, Sam & Janet have secrets that rank right up there with the whole slayer thing... Sam has saved the world many times, all that stuff. Wouldn't be surprised if some high tech stuff from the SGC has wound up in slayer hands, without them realizing the source, based on the helicopter etc. One of those 302s ?
Might be funny if they get all surprised if Sam recognizes Sumerian or Egyptian writing on something... Hm... Willow called on Osiris to resurrect Buffy (the actual god, not the Goa'uld fake of course) -might be a bit of tension if Willow casually calls on one, & Sam/Janet react very very negatively ie flinching etc....
Comments from author:
I'm trying to avoid the cliched reactions like that. The whole 'Dawn proves the existence of magic in a flashy way' thing in the very first chapter and Janet being willing to acknowledge the existence of magic early on is part of that. Of course, they haven't really followed things to their conclusion based on what they've learned ... yet.

Daniel is going to be the hard sell when he stumbles into the picture in a few chapters.

Willow? Haven't written her story insertion yet... we'll see how that goes.

302? The helicopter is "just" a souped up Sikorsky UH-60 (aka 'Black Hawk') :-). It isn't exactly Airwolf. Sort of, maybe, kind-a. :-)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from gigi
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Great update. Please write more soon.
Review By [gigi] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Visit - Part 1" from FireWolfe
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Love to see more.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wearing of the Tweed" from draconis
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This was a really fun much too short story.

Good humor, well paced, intriguing new facts (like Faith's early high school graduation and big brain, the multi-faceted Slayer connections, Slayer Commando training and officer commissions, something about a tongue...), a number of interesting potential story directions and sub-plots identified, and then it just wham!...hits a wall called "The End".

Instead of "Don't ask, don't tell", it was "Set it up, but don't tell".

Unfortunately, I don't have a groveling outfit.
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Response to author response:
That's great! Looking forward to anything more.
(I'll look into a groveling outfit, just in case. Maybe someone would setup a "story" on groveling outfits to which readers could submit designs?)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.

No grovelling outfit required. There will be more but I'm trying to keep each ficlet "episode" self contained since I'm not sure when I'll be inspired to write more.
Review By [draconis] • Date [4 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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