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Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from ShinseiTonbo
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Review By [ShinseiTonbo] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from MavenAlysse
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Oh, wow. This was tremendously well done. I could *hear* Riddick's voice. You've done an excellent job and I look forward to the next bit.

Thank you so much for sharing.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from banner
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This is an interesting concept. I'll be watching for more.
Review By [banner] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from eriktheviking
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Great writing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from ChiVayne
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Dawn as Kyra makes sense if you bring Dawn in early, but you've left it pretty open.
Nice start.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from Morgomir
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Interesting. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from Jonakhensu
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I'm hoping for Dawn or Cordelia. Dawn because of the age diference, and because messing with Dawn is always fun, considering she shouldn't exist yet. Cordelia because she has a similar mentality. Willow... I can't see wearing what Krya does. You know, regardless of who you choose, it'll be amusing. One of the Cordettes could be hilarrious, for example.
Review By [Jonakhensu] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from CPTSkip
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Wonderful start. I definitely look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from kyzhart
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Nice start. Can't wait to read more. Loved the stashing on the roof. Very smart.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from Bluesnowman
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looking good so far.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from purrfus
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Loved the opening - just bam right into Riddick without the usual Halloween rehash.

And the Riddick voice comes through strong and clear.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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Freakin' AWESOME.

narrative and voice were excellent.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from Fyrloche
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I love it! I'm a big fan of Riddick and you seem to have a handle on his personality. This should be good. Sidenote - Did you know that 2 new movies are in the works? Vin Diesel mentioned them in an interview.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Eyes Open....." from bohica
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I like where this is going, the Riddick films are some of my favorites - even with the timeline shifting needed to bring Halloween into the mix. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this.
Comments from author:
Note the other comment... Tried to respond directly but it seems to have bounced. If you want me to respond directly, gotta give me a way to do so *chuckles*
Review By [bohica] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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