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Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Just read the reviews; obviously someone with no talent has decided to go and critic every author with skill and imagination !
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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So, the story will go on ? Great. Waiting for it patiently ...

Emmanuelle
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I really like this so far, but may I make a tiny suggestion? Perhaps you could place all the small pieces that don't have any time or location lapses between them on one page together? People like me who haven't moved into the next century still have dial-up modems, and reloading the entire page to get a couple of paragraphs is a royal pain.

Anyway, keep plugging away! You've got a wicked sense of humor on some of these pages.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Thoroughly enjoyable.
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Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is so cute! I love the emotion between both characters and this story is so touching. I just wish that the chapters were longer but all together this story rocks! Great job and I hope to see more of it in the future.
Areai
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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17 chapters, and only 181 hits. Might a clue you're not attracting a large amount of return readers, and therefore, might be doing something wrong.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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this is cool.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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YES. I want you to continue.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very amusing so far! A few actual belly laughs escaped despite my best efforts of holding them down here in the library. Good job! Definitely looking for more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Fudge defeated by a ten-year-old. That's priceless!
Please go on. What's going to happen to Willow and Severus? Will she ever see Xander and Jesse? How did she cross dimensions? Isn't that supposed to be awfully hard to do? Did the PTBs do it?

Hope to read more soon.
Emmanuelle
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Where Willow Went" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Hey Joy! This was very amusing. Little ten year old Willow is charming the pants off Snape. I hope you decide to continue this story. I'd love to see how they resolve the telephone and computer issue. Plus, being ten, if Willow is a Witch, she'll be getting that letter from Hogwarts soon. Imagine the fun of being Snape's adopted daughter while attending Hogwarts. Hope you'll decide to continue this. It's really cute!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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I find this a rather interesting story so far. I would like to see it continued, possibly with slightly longer chapters.

Will the readers (even if not the characters) ever learn why Willow was transported across dimensions?

Will we see more of Fudge's bumbling? How old is Willow in relation to Harry Potter and the other students?

Does this mean that Snape willl end up adopting Willow and teaching her controlled magic from the start, thus preventing much of the badness that plagues her Sunnydale-timeline efforts? Or will she be sent back to Sunnydale, where she effectively must raise herself?

Thank you for sharing this, although there were a few moments when Snape's word choices seemed a bit off to me. Not his overall attitude, or his disdain for Fudge, but some of the sentences didn't quite sound... well, not quite Snape. (and I know tha really doesn't sound very specific, which I'm sorry about.)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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