I'm so sad there's never been any more to this.

Um.... wow. I honestly this that this was/is the best Buffy/Twilight Crossover I've ever read. Seriously, it was really good. So, I do hope that you'll come back to it someday. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Well it's not finished as I noticed most of your stories aren't finished, but at least you didn't stop with a cliff-hanger. It stands good as is although a epilogue would be better, but you left it open for any number of new adventures. Thanks for writing and sharing this great story.

Chapters 49 & 50, the rape and murder of Rona ... don't think you could have done better. I was like watching a movie you described everything with plenty of detail, any more detail and it would have made me sick, it was just right. LOL your spelling and typing sucks, but you do have a mind for creative writing very near the genius level. I'm enjoying this story more than even an action movie, which are generally my favorites. While Dawn is my most favorite character, all her friends are also very good. I had to make some notes around chapter ten since there was starting to be more characters than I could remember, but I found after I wrote them down I never had to refer to my notes again. I hope you continue writing, you have a gift ... use it, whether it's fanfiction or original writing.

This is a great story and it's unusual that I'm reading it because I really hate reading unfinished stories, because they rarely ever get finished, especially when it's been over two years since it's been updated. Love that this story revolves around Dawn, my favorite Buffy character ... never heard of whatever this has been crossed with, but the characters seem interesting ... lol sparkly vampires.
If you do decide to take up writing this or other stories in the future I suggest you get a beta to correct your typos and grammar.
In the mean time I'm gonna finish reading the rest of this story, I find it very interesting. Thanks for sharing it.

So, a GREAT story here!!! Yet, there have been no new chapters beyond ch 72 (Nov 2010). Hopefully, this story is continued in the next installment for Four Square!!

This has been a very entertaining read! I like your Edward and Bella much better than canon. :) I like the way you fleshed out some of the more minor characters as well. Your OC Nick reminds me a very lot of a guy I used to know a long time ago. :) I hope life and your muse lets you return to this soon. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all wraps up.

I have just finished this enjoyable and very good story. I hope you will start posting more chapters soon as I would love to see more of it.

Love this story, which I have now re-read several times, and I wondered if you planned to continue it. I am curious to find out more about how Bella adjusts and the four square and friends move into their futures.

I've had a very rough year. The next chapter is in the works and should hopefully be posted soonish. I've been rereading the whole story in my spare time to get back into the feel of it.

hi joy,

sorry to hear about your summer and I really felt bad about putting more stress on you. though I was very hopeful that you had most of the next chapters ready for both DP and four square... Ok lets stick with calling it Dawn Potter cause DP sounds like its a porno. speaking of which have you ever noticed the name Nymphadora Tonks sounds like a porn stars name? as I've said b4 I'm only marginally in control of the insanity that come spewing out of my brain at odd and often inconvenient times. just know that there's a ton of people here @ TTH that love and appreciate the work you do. I'm of course not referring to the ones who write flames like 'oh my god you suck'#13 or other such drivel. I've noticed that people who write reviews like that also have never posted a single story. so I say remember what Ernest Hemingway said about writing. "Writing is easy, just set down in front of a typewriter and bleed!" hope this made you smile... even if only a little and let me know if you need to talk about anything ... well write about it via e-mail. I'm taking pchy this semester so I'm fully qualified to put my hand on my chin and say 'MMMMMmmmm that's interesting... now tell me about your mother."

as always
*Hugs&Kisses*

Hi! I love this story! I was wondering when it'll be updated :) I love reading this and I've already started from chapter one like 3 or 4 times and read it all through :)

Hey, Joy.

I just finished rereading this entire thing and wow. I got all emotional at certain parts even though I knew what was coming. I guess it's just a testament to how good your writing is. I hope that you update soon. It's been awhile and I'd really like more of this amazing fic.

Luckie

I plan on it! I've been blocked and drained out, and busy with RL, but I do plan on finishing this, it hasn't been abandoned. Glad you like it!

The conversation and whatnot are all excellent so far, but the problem i have is that you've far understated the power level of the vampires of the twilight continuum. Overpowered as they may be, it is canon that they are each far more powerful than even an amped up slayer...although Stephanie Meyer's description of this is inconsistent, at best.

For example, newborn Bella has the strength to(As she estimates) stop a cement truck(around 66000 lbs), rolling downhill, at 40+ miles per hour. In essence, a twilight vampire could probably not only kill a slayer with ease, they could most likely throw that slay into ORBIT.

Yes, it is brokenly overpowered, but that's just basing it on her continuity. I'm all for convincing the volturi not to attack through some political or magical gig, but in terms of raw power, there isn't any comparison. One of the main factors of twilight vampires is that they DON'T have any weaknesses, other than other monsters on a similar level (pretty much SSS class monsters).

Personally, i would change it to something involving the canonically absurdly powerful children of the moon(supposedly capable of putting up a good fight even to small covens of vampires) which pretty much makes them the twilight equivalent of Doomsday to superman. It would also be a whole bunch more clever.

Anyway, that's just my view, but its a great fic regardless. Cheers!

It is nearly impossible to have a crossover in wihich both canons are kept accurate. I adjusted the Twilight canon to exist within the Buffy canon, not vice versa. I don't actually *like* Twilight, I started this fic on a dare, so I tend to be prejudiced against the Twilight side. If you don't like the power system, that's fine.

I just go finished re-reading this, and I have to say, hats off to you. What an amazing adventure, spanning years and drama, and love and tears. Truly on of my favorite stories on the site, and most certainly my most favorite portrayal of Bella and Edward, and a top ten on my list of Dawn fanfiction, who is my all-time favorite character.

I love the way everyone in this tale has, not a happy life/ending, but a satisfying one. I like how, even in the middle of such supernatural circumstance, it feels like real life to read. And I absolutley love the feeling of family you engender to your readers.

Serious kudos to you. I hope to be reading more of this amazing story soon.

I have every intention of updating this soon, however I've been blocked on the next chapter for *months*. It's been suggested I just skip over the next scene and move on, since it'scausing me so many problems (It's supposed to be a Embry/Jude/Eric/Nick sex scene, and it's completely blocking me) but since it's not brutally important to the plot, I may just reference it happened and move on.

I'm very glad you like it. I hope to write more soon.

Dawn's my favorite character. Most of my Buffy fics and crossovers involve her.


Thank you for your compliments, that's *exactly* what I'm going for. As much realism as possible within a supernatural world.

Glad you like it!

Your story is amazing, keep writing can't wait to see what's gonna happen next