Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from andystreetuk
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Fantastic story, I was unable to stop reading it, and ended up taking a day off work to finish it :)
PLEASE write more :)
Comments from author:
OMG, don't lose your job!
I'm working on the next part now.
Glad you like it!
Review By [andystreetuk] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from Bunney
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Okay so i have taken 4 days and read this whole fic as well as all of your AN and i have to say you did a fabulous job. I say this from many POVs. First being that i HATE Twilight with a fiery passion that makes me wish hateful things on S Meyer. So for me to even choose to read your fic was a big step for me.
Second I truly enjot a well planned long fic. Yours is actually not that long in comparison so don't worry how long it takes you end it when you feel is right. If you are curious the longest i read the first story of the series is over 5000 pages and the unfinished sequal was almost close to 10000. It was a long read...lol...though really worth it.
And Last you have really taken the 2 and blended them in a realistic fashion without compromising the integritiy of the character and you should do a little dance around for such things :) Then again throwing in sex or violence doesn't hurt :) That is what they do on TV when they need a change or a better segway :)
Anyway I plan on reading the rest just cuz i know you will do a good job of finishing it and make it worth my time to do so :)
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from DoodlePenguin
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Okay. I just spent three days reading this. Three Days! ON MY PHONE! Cause I don't have Internet anywhere els. You need to update. Soon! Please I LOVE this! It great! And I love the four square idea! Please add a chapter before march!
Comments from author:
I'm going to try. I've been working on some other stuff lately, but I am going to try and update this soon.
I'm really glad you like it!
I may need to reread the whole thing again to get my head back in the zone. But I know where it's going (And where it's going may possibly involve an Eric/Embry/Nick/Jude foursome, lol) I've just got to write it
Review By [DoodlePenguin] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from twlight
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"I ment what I said and said what I ment..." I read the whole story all over again. As always I love this wonderful story. I can't believe how many spelling errors you have in some of these chapters, have you ever gone back and reread this mammoth story? I can totally understand why Stacy didn't want to be in Sam's pack, she's blaming Sam for her brother leaving her and she really doesn't know or in some cases like some of the boy's in that pack. I love the spell that Dawn did to somewhat postpone the change for Stacy so that they could explain what was happening to her and that they could give her the bracelet and cut her hair. I love how you described Bella post hunting, the fact that she is happy she was still breast feeding is a bit funny. I am very very eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story hopefully it won't be an extremely long wait so I don't HAVE to read the story again to know what is going on in the story. Again I love this epic story.
Comments from author:
I haven't re-read this story in a while, but because I don't work with a beta anymore (my last beta kept trying to change my plot and characters which is not what a beta is supposed to do) I reread my stories from time to time, and I'm always finding typos and fixing them. I do need to do it again. I'm glad you like it, honey. You're one my my favorite readers.
*feels really, really bad*
Review By [twlight] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from AchillesMonkey
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I've really enjoyed reading this story. I hope that you update soon!
Review By [AchillesMonkey] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from Ansku
I think once Stacy learns everything about her brother she might empathize with Kim, after all, they both lost Jared, and also, Stacy will have a little nephew to take care of. Kim will need her, and the rest of Jared's family.
Talking about that, I just knew you were going to kill someone, and that it was gonna be bad. I mean, after Renee and Rona, especially Rona, it was obvious that it was gonna be bad. I still wish it had been someone else, maybe Paul or Sam, I especially dislike Sam, both in cannon and in your fic, his death wouldn't have hurt me as much as Jared's. And while I know life is cruel, this was war and all that jazz, I still don't like it.
Wish this had been Bangel, I just love that pairing, though at the same time I understand why you prefer differently.
This is the second time I see a tryad made with Alice, Jasper and someone else, third if you count one that hasn't actually happened yet but will be happening eventually.
I just love what you've done with almost everyone in this fic, and even the things I dislike I can pass up with so many good ones in comparison.
Can't wait to see what you end this fic with, I'm sure it¡s gonna be a bang.
P.S. When is Xander gonna get his happy ending? I think he's the only one actually missing one thus far...Hey! Maybe Stacy will imprint on him! jejeje
See ya in the next chapter. Hope you update soon.
P.S.S. You have my respect with this fic, I mean, I've been known to write long fics, but I seriously doubt I would ever be able to write something as long as this, and without it getting repetitive or tedious. I'm in awe.
Comments from author:
To be fair, both Sam and Paul are going to die eventually, lol, since they're mated to mortals.
Stacy's not going to imprint on Xander, but Xander will survive. I hope you don't believe that somebody has to be in a relationship to have a happy ending. Xander will wind up happy, but he might not wind up in a committed relationship. He's of the people I;m currently unsure of. I usually ship Xander with either Buffy or Cordy, or occasionally Faith. And from time to time I slash him with someone. But Xander's future is one I still haven't worked out.
Honestly, Angel is pretty much my least favorite regular character in the Buffyverse. Personally, I like him vetter as a character when he's not in a relationship at all.
Ooh, I've killed more than just Renee and Rona, right? I've also killed off Ethan and Kennedy. And of course there will be more deaths before the series is over. Death is kind of the obvious end to a mortal life. ;-)
I'm glad you like it. This fic became a much bigger deal than I ever intended it to.
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from SisterD
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You know what else is interesting? I originally didn't like Twilight crossovers that didn't involve the words "And then Buffy staked Edward" or some variant thereof. However, this is the best unintentional birthday gift I could have gotten last year. Thanks! Planning to try to finish it on the 25th, make it an exact year? Poor Stacy. That's all my mind can work right now, sorry. I might come back and add more detail later.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you like it, and happy early birthday! Yeah, I actually own the "BUffy staked Edward" t-shirt, so this seemed like a very unlikely story for me to write, but I like it. It;s not going to end on the 25th, but I'd like to put the next chapter up then. I still have 2 weddings, some character development, a couple of babies and some relationship changes to fit into this story, before it's finished. My word goal is to have all of Four Square be 300,000 words before I start typing up the half-written spin-offs Ive been writing in my notebook, and then start the first full sequel next summer. The three spin-offs I've started are a Criminal MInds crossover with Dawn, a Numbers crossover with Eric and Nick, and a Castle crossover with Embry.
The sequel will take place at some point in the future. Then there will be an additional story with the same characters that takes place in, like, 500 years.
All of this is completely based around what real life throws at me, so I don't know when they chapters will make it into the net.
I'm really glad you like it, and I'm glad I've got another anti-Edward person. I've tried to not character-bash too much, but Edward pisses me off. THe only way I could write him was by changing the nature of his character.
And I like Stacy. Se and Nick are my favorite OCs so far. :D
Review By [SisterD] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from SwimmieTeam
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Loved it. I didn't expect that! I mean, Jared's little *sister*. I thought Leah only changed 'cause she's part of a prophecy! Anyways, I hated that you took sooo long, but loved what you wrote and I can't wait for more, hopefully, soon!
Comments from author:
I hated how long it took, Seriously, I've been coming home every night and just STARING at the word document, willing it to fill itself. It was awful.
I love Stacy. I love turning the Quileutes' world on its head *giggle*
If everything goes as planned, the next chapter will go up in 2 weeks. IF everything goes as planned. But if.
I'm glad you like it!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from slmncpm
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well, teen girls ... hell teens as a whole are hardly rational. *hands you scones* i still love this!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from debbie
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Interesting that another female wolf joined the pack and that she chose to align with Jake rather than stay in Sam's pack. I hope Leah can help her deal with the transition. How sweet is Esme building Jake and Dawn a house on their property so she can keep them as well!
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from Blackett
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missed you. still loving your story....it is one of those stories that stays with you, the world that you put together with your crossover....makes sense to me....and I so love your Embry...more please!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from JennRosbury
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Wonderful chapter as always. A year has it been that long since this journey started....wow congratulations!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-Two" from DrakePendragon
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I loved it. I didn't think you were intentionally character bashing. The owner of the thoughts was quite obvious to me. Oh, and as someone who loves the outdoors... poor redwood.
Review By [DrakePendragon] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventy-One" from RinHitokiri
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I sat down and read this story in one day. I absolutely love the way you went about this crossover. I look forward to future works.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! I'm unsure of it at times, but I'm still working on it, I promise. I have pages and pages of it handwritten in notebooks, it's just a matter of transcribing and revising from the zero drafts.
Review By [RinHitokiri] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Not Rated