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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from spk
Review:
I loved the twist you threw in about Bella being Dawn's sister, too. Very unique idea that adds a great dynamic to the story. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from namegoeshere
Review:
Connor!! Connor, Connor, Connor! In case you can't tell I love Connor. I also love your Dawn/Jake. But I can't wait until you explain Connor to the others.
Comments from author:
It'll happen eventually. Connor won't become a major character until later. I love Connor too. Connor and Dawn are my favorite Buffyverse characters, and Jake and Leah are my favorite Twilight characters.
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Clandestine
Review:
Yay, an update! Great job with the new chapters. Can't wait to see where you'll take things next!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from spring
Review:
wonderful. I love that Dawn ane Bella made those bracletts for the Cullen's. I eagerly await the next installment of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Did you notice that chapter five was totally dedicated to you? ;-) I'm working on chapter eight now. It's a little complicat4ed, because there are a ton and a half of characters interacting in this one.
Review By [spring] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from hottmess
Review:
So far lovin' this!!!!!

Looking forward to the rest of it
Review By [hottmess] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Rissah
Review:
I'm enjoying your take on BtVS meets the Cullens - maybe it's because Dawn's calling Edward out on his broody, possessive nature. Whatever it is, nicely written! I'm looking forward to the next segment!
Review By [Rissah] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from spk
Review:
Great update! I like the way you're having Buffy try to bring the two groups together. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Lulubell
Review:
I am loving this story! Every chapter makes me want to read more..
Review By [Lulubell] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from KeiraFirestone
Review:
I like the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. I also like the whole Jacob/Dawn pairing. You also asked to have any Sam written as Same errors pointed out and here are 2 that I noticed:



-“Good job, Same.” Buffy said. “I missed the first time too.”


-“I'm amenable to that,” Sam said. “I don't know if I'll ever trust you Carlisle. Your presence in Forks has greatly altered and damaged my life,” Same said sadly.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Fixed!
Review By [KeiraFirestone] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Clandestine
Review:
Dawn and Jake? Very good match. Though, I can't wait to see what'll happen when Edward gets inte the mix and discovers what Bella's been up to... This is a great story, thank you for sharing it!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yeah, I'm planning on eventual Dawn/Jake and Bella/Edward, but right now, Dawn, bella & Jake are the 3 Musketeers (who also hang out with Angela, 'cause she's cool), and Edward's being a great big doody-head. I'm really enjoying writing this fic, even though it's giving me a headache and interrupting my ability to pass college, lol.
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
I wasn't sure what to think of this fic at first, but it's growing on me. I'm interested to see where you will take it. And I too want Jake for Christmas!
Comments from author:
My own space-heater, what every girl needs for Christmas. ;-) v Thanks for the comments! I hope I can keep growing on you (in a very non-fungal way).
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from spring
Review:
This is such an excellent chapter. ^_^ The visions that Alice gets at the end of the chapters are a really cool way to end the chapter. Again I eagerly await the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from celticjenn
Review:
Excellent story! Hoping to see more soon!
Review By [celticjenn] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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