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Buffy Summers~Slayer of Goa'uld

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Review of chapter "The Chosen Chosen One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
So the watcher has something like a mini version of an Ancient database, that was downloaded into Buffy's brain.
I suppose it includes all languages that she will need.

I think that Buffy will learn a lot from her new temporary watcher.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chosen Chosen One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting start! Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chosen Chosen One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Watcher better grin now 'cause when Buffy wakes up, my guess is she's gonna deck him for that. And that's if he *isn't* evil; if he is, I'm thinking she'll transfer her threat of a ribcage hat to him and follow through on it. So, I'm kinda guessing Watcher is Daniel?
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Dream" from sunrisereader
Review:
An interesting start, i am looking forward to reading more.
Review By [sunrisereader] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Dream" from spk
Review:
I am definitely intrigued by this start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Dream" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Your story could be from Buffy's POV or imagine if an unknown, intact pyramid was discovered beneath the sands of Egypt. It's surface was still covered with marble and a gold top, which represented Buffy's pale skin and blonde hair.
The story shifts to what Daniel discovers inside it and hence Buffy's adventure during the time of Ra. There could be unexplained references that actually represent temporal shifts that affect her, then she becomes aware of the SCG without them knowing it.
Anyway, that's my little rant.
It'll be interesting to see where you take your story and I hope that further chapters are somewhat longer.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Dream" from Krysstinia
Review:
Great teaser. I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [5 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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