Review of chapter "The Chosen Chosen One" from mmooch
Review:
Watcher better grin now 'cause when Buffy wakes up, my guess is she's gonna deck him for that. And that's if he *isn't* evil; if he is, I'm thinking she'll transfer her threat of a ribcage hat to him and follow through on it. So, I'm kinda guessing Watcher is Daniel?
Review By [mmooch] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am definitely intrigued by this start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Dream" from MaxGSandeman
Review:
Your story could be from Buffy's POV or imagine if an unknown, intact pyramid was discovered beneath the sands of Egypt. It's surface was still covered with marble and a gold top, which represented Buffy's pale skin and blonde hair. The story shifts to what Daniel discovers inside it and hence Buffy's adventure during the time of Ra. There could be unexplained references that actually represent temporal shifts that affect her, then she becomes aware of the SCG without them knowing it. Anyway, that's my little rant. It'll be interesting to see where you take your story and I hope that further chapters are somewhat longer.
Review By [MaxGSandeman] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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MaxGSandeman
