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Review of chapter "The Man on the Fairway" from Gideon
Review:
Nice to see Bones sharing something so precious with Booth and that he appreciates it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man on the Fairway" from PowerStealerRogue
Review:
Will Connor make an appearance? I always loved the interactions between them? Or anyone from Angel/Buffy? Great story.
Comments from author:
Not in this story- it's just focusing on Booth/Angel's thoughts on their cases at this time-, but there's a lot more crossover action in the already-posted sequel "The Sister in the Door"; so long as you know what happened in "Bones" Seasons One to Four, you can pick up what's happening easily enough...
Review By [PowerStealerRogue] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Woman in the Garden" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I haven't seen the original episode but I do like the pacing of the selected scenes and the demonstration that Angel-as-Booth still broods.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Superhero in the Alley" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Is this episode before or after the halloween episode when Brennan dressed as Wonder Woman, and she described it as the same costume she wore every year?
Comments from author:
That takes place in Season Three, so I won't be telling that story for a while.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Woman in the Car" from VillageOrchid
Review:
In this chapter and a few others you have Angel thinking about Connor. In this one you go into future fic, so I can hope you're leading towards some scenes with Connor in the future. I note that this is a series, but that both stories are in complete. So I am guessing I will get some of my answers in the next story.
Comments from author:
The basic idea is that this story will just look at key events in the first four seasons of "Bones" from Booth/Angel's POV, and the second features an alternate version of "Bones"'s fifth season where Booth/Angel's past comes back to haunt him in a VERY unexpected manner...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man on Death Row" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the character moments and the written style. I think you were "made for" writing novelizations. It's crap pay compared to original fiction if original takes off, but it is a good job for a writer... and can lead to changes to have original fiction published.
Comments from author:
One of the main reasons I like writing fanfic is the chance it gives me to develop my writing style, so glad you like that side of things here.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Boy in the Tree" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is all very interesting... and of course i can't tell which are new scenes and which are "novelization" scenes. The flow and style are good.
Comments from author:
If it makes a difference, they're all generally meant to be scenes from the episodes themselves (Although I include a couple of original moments where I think it's appropriate); the only thing I'm adding is how Booth/Angel felt about everything he's thinking about.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilot" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like this. And I like the characters from Bones.. though I never got into watching it episodically... at least not yet.
Comments from author:
Well, glad to hear I can maintain your interest despite your irregular watching of "Bones"; hope I live up to expectations.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After the Fall" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool idea.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilot" from (Past Donor)DWduck
Review:
Excellent job. You did very well getting into Booth / angel's head. It was all very believable.
Review By [(Past Donor)DWduck] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man in the Fallout Shelter" from mendenbar
Review:
OMG, TTH just dumped my entire proof! Crap. Okay, I will try to reconstruct it.

Sighing slightly as he glanced at his watch and wandered down to the lower levels so that he could dstay out {I have done this quite often, shifted a letter from the end of one word to the beginning of the next.}


"Biological contamination," Goodman replied (Booth hadn't even seen the guy come in; he must have walked onto the table while he was lost in thought). {This isn't a typo etc. but did he REALLY walk 'onto' the 'table?' I would have expected 'platform' but I'm not writing it.}

e jumped up from behind the 'pod' containing the body, his hands held high in the air and Angela's , only for her to show no reaction to his rpresence even after he jumped for a second time. {There is something missing from this sentence after 'Angela's' but I am not sure what to suggest. Also there is an initial 'r' in 'rpresence' that doesn't belong.}

he walked around the pod and pulled a chair over from another desk sot hat he could sit down beside her. {Again, a misplaced initial letter 'sot hat'.}

...to coincide with the pagan right of the winter solace so that... {It should be 'rite' not 'right', and 'solstice' not 'solace'.}

...prompting him to halt in the doorway as he watched Bones talking silently with Angela in a couch that had... {Again, not an error as such, but generally we sit "on" something, not "in" it.}

I know that there was at least one more near the beginning as I remember there were 2 before the 'Angela's' one but I can't find it now. I hope this is what you were asking for. I proofread my daughter's papers (PhD History, Spanish Medieval) and I make her correct all commas since she changed format from MLA style to Chicago Style when she went to grad school, but because of this I tend to "see" errors. I apologize if I am offensive.

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Comments from author:
Well, I made the modifications, and thanks for pointing them out (Although the next time you do this kind of thing, could you put these reviews down as 'Private' so that you don't show EVERYBODY where I made a couple of errors, please?)
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man in the Fallout Shelter" from mendenbar
Review:
You really do such a marvelous job with these "rewrites."

I noticed that in previous chapters (and other stories) there are rarely any typos,grammatical errors, etc but for some reason, this chapter has several. And in one place you have lost part of a sentence (where Booth pops up behind Brennan on the Christmas Eve Day.) Considering the troubles I am having with FFN, I wouldn't be surprised to discover TTH is having problems as well.
Comments from author:
I'll acknowledge that I may have forgotten to put in a couple of commas, but I don't think I've missed anything word wise; would you care to clarify what's missing?
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man on Death Row" from ecifrog
Review:
I really like this story. Looking forward to the next update :)
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [13 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Man in a Wall" from GoldenRat
Review:
Interesting concept, is the supernatural world going to stumble across Booth?
Comments from author:
It's not planned for this story- this one's just looking at how Booth's past as Angel influences his thoughts on matters in his present-, but I'm working on another crossover that features Booth facing some VERY particular foes from Angel's history...
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Man in a Wall" from UrbanGhost
Review:
I really like this story, and I can't wait till you get to Season 2, Episode 9: Aliens in a Spaceship, when Booth gets all Angel on the PR guy....

-- The UrbanGhost
Review By [UrbanGhost] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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