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Review of chapter "Save Me." from Gideon
Review:
I liked the story you posted in the chapter and the pic too.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Save Me." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
OH! YES!

Great picture, not sure whether a background would have made it better or distracted from the characters. The way you've fitted these two (three?) pictures together is perfect. I love the expression on Faith's face (was that really Tru?) showing real concern for young Dawn.

Great stuff.

You may be glad to hear I'm writing Chapter Seven of my Severance fic. I've got to the messy bit where Faith and Dawn have to escape the human-demon hybrids through the forest. Oh! The blood and gore! Oh! The sexual tension between our two favorite girls!

See ya,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Ooh! Can you hear my squeals of girlish delight? Because they're nearly deafening here, I'm sure! Can't wait to read!

Thank you so much for all the reviews! They really help out, keep me going! Can't wait to get inspired by your story! :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Captured?" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok a little BDSM for Faith and Dawnie! Pity Dawn's face is in so much shadow but it still works for me.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Ah, yeah. I think I like it, I just wish the Faith part was better quality so I could have played with it more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hmmm..." from (Past Donor)FaithSummers
Review:
these are beautiful both the text and the images!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)FaithSummers] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hmmm..." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Looked a little 'over-exposed' as us old photographers used to say. Anyway, yes it could get naughty! Ok, you've convinced me, I'm going to start on my Faith/Dawn 'Severance' xover next week! I've sorta been thinking of how to get the girls together since you started posting these, you've finally worn down by defenses!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Awesome! Nothing I'd like to hear more! Definately keep me posted on that, I can't wait to read it! Glad I could nudge you in the right direction :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Girly?" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Now this one looked a lot better after I scaled it up! Good work!

Give me more! MORE I TELL YOU!!!!

MAW-HA-HA!

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Hahaha, thank you! I'll try my best to deliver ;P
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Girly?" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Yummy! Keep up the good work, one question do you have this latest in a larger resolution?
Comments from author:
Thank-you! And, unfortunately, no. Sorry. :(
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Random" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok, top picture, sorry Dawn looks 'stuck' on. Faith however doesn't and what are those two women doing in the background?

Black/white picture; now this is really good, very atmospheric. When I used to do photography (before it went digital) I found B/W very effective in some situations as it is here.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Ha ha ha ha. I couldn't find a good picture of Dawn/MT to use, so I just grabbed one and pretty much threw her in. Which, looking back, was probably not a good idea...Anyways, the ladies in the back were actually already in the picture, as was Faith/ED. It was some sort of women's benifit..thingy. Thank-you on the second!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Protection" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Nice. Very Nice. Very Very Nice. I think you get the idea. :)
Comments from author:
Thank-you!
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Random" from Missingviolet
Review:
ED looked really really good in the 1st pic!
2nd pic beautifully done!
Comments from author:
I know! Doesn't she always look good though? Ha ha, I liked how relaxed she looks. Thank-you!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Random" from FaithWinchester
Review:
Sexy pairing, love it and I want to see more!
Comments from author:
Thank-you! They are severely lacking in this pairing on this site, and everywhere else. Very sad, that is. Glad I could make you happy :)
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from Xeelia
Review:
Gorgeous work! Love them!
Comments from author:
Thank-you!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
First; is MT/Dawn really that much taller than ED/Faith?

The second picture...just how many cold showers do you want me to take!!!

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
He he. And you know, I don't know, I always thought MT was just really tall, but I guess I was just always comparing her to SMG who is obviously short...huh.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from CPTSkip
Review:
I thought the bottom picture was quite hot. There is something wrong about the upper picture, but I can't put my finger on what it is. Possibly mismatched skin tones? Thanks anyway for some lovely pictures.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Face transplanting is so not me.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story is wonderful and your pictures are hot as hell. As I said, I really hadn't thought about a Faith/Dawn paring before. But you make it work, and quite well. More, please?
Comments from author:
Ahh, thank-you! I'll try my best to get more :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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