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Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from Xeelia
Review:
Awesome! More! Please!
Comments from author:
Thank-you! I'll try! :)
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Nice work. The ficlets are good, and your manips are superb. Much better than most of the ones I've seen. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naughty Girls" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Excuse me while I have a cold shower!

Can't wait to see more.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
lol, oh your reviews keep me going! Thank you so much! :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "*GASP!*" from LFW
Review:
Great photos, except for chapter three fir that is awesome.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clubbing" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Cool story and a bloody hot pic. Great choice in poses and expressions.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Tee hee, thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clubbing" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent job on both stories and pictures. I thought I'd read a lot of fanfic, but I don't remember reading many or any stories where Dawn is paired with Faith. However I find I actually like the combination. And they sure look purdy together, don't they? Lol!
Comments from author:
Thaank-you! Yeah, I never even thought of it, until I stumbled upon a few stories myself.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Protection" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Having been doing a few Faith/Dawn stories (only one posted so far) it was with great interest that I looked at your post...and I wasn't disapointed, I shall be tracking this so I hope you do a few more.

Nice manips btw, so often manips are a disapointment but these are pritty good, well done.

Next time I stuck for a story idea I shall come back and have a look at this.

Keep up the good work,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Aw, geeze, thanks! There shall be more, I have tons of pictures I plan on mashing together! >;D
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "*GASP!*" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh bloody hell that's freaking HOT! Beautifully put together and once again their expression match their personalities... Dawn especially has a look of surprise/arousal and Faith is simply arousal... lol

I have an idea for the story behind this...

"Hey Dawn patrol went faster then I thought." Buffy called out as she burst through door to come to a sudden stop at the sight before her.


;)

Wispr
Comments from author:
Hee hee hee, ueah I sort of saw it as a 'caught in the act' moment. lol, feel free to write anything!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Must be Tuesday" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh hell love both how you wrote Dawn's thoughts... really captured her personality there. Plus the pic you did is bloody gorgeous... you really out did yourself with the compositioning and how they look like they are posing together.

Love their expression and clothing also.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Ghee! Thanks! Tee hee, you'll make me blush.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Protection" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
A powerful short story you wrote there, also really like the pic you created. Wonderful job in getting Dawn inserted so she appears between Faith and the gun.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Aww, thank you! I liked the idea of Faith not only being protectively in front of Dawn, but all around her. Also, I just added two more chapters if you want to check those out :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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