Cool chapter, a little bit of help like 4 trained soldiers is always handy. I don't buy that Giles would send SG1 off to Angel all alone though, or even tell them anything about Buffy at all. Why would he trust them? Surely he would have Xander go with them, along with Angel? I feel like Xander missed out here :( Can't wait to see how Buffy convinces Jack to send her back to Sunnydale for the next year. I would almost expect him to send her back with a flamethrower or other heavy weapon (after suitable weapons training first, of course)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
oh man. I wonder what Jack is gone say, because she already told that she had to burn the gym because it was full of vampires. They didn't believe her so if I was Buffy I wouldn't dare to tell them that she is the Slayer.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Let the talking begins. good luck and happy writing with that one.
She was nine when she came through the portal. Nine when she gets adopted by Joyce, her Year of birth moved ten years back on paper, So she became ten on paper instead of nine. she is Joyce child for seven years when she burns the gym. So on paper now she would be seventeen?
Like the story by the way, can't wait for more.
Edit: thank you. I already thought that you meant 1 year back, but i wanted to know for sure.
Comments from author:
I was confused after reading your comment, so I went back and re-read the section you're talking about. If her birthdate was moved back 10 years, then she should be 10 years older than she actually is, so I corrected it.
But in all other aspects, your right. She's a year older on paper than she actually is. That doesn't effect her year in school though. Depending on where you start in the US, anyone born after Sept. 1st has to wait a year to enter school, so she's still where she's supposed to be.
Thank you for pointing that out.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Should be quite a talk. But at least she's not dating a musician (little joke reference to Willow/Oz/W's mom in S3). Anyway, looks like her little secret is out in the open. Well, who her bio-parents are, not the time travel thing. Later on--the Knights of B had tattoos on their foreheads. Goa'uld cult?
Comments from author:
Maybe. I haven't thought that far ahead.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated