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Review of chapter "The Note" from GraysonPaladin
Very interesting twist on the 2010 episode. Now what you could do to continue this, is that due to Buffy parentage she might have to sent away to keep Senator Stupid-head and the NID from doing the nefarious deeds. Buffy is sent to stay with Jack's or Sam's cousin/sister Joyce. Thus protecting the rest of the Buffy timeline until the Initiative ends and SG-1 comes to clean up. Still an excellent story but it should not be stand alone. ~GraysonPaladin
Comments from author:
This is an idea that starts me thinking. If I do end up continuing this and I use this idea, I will credit it to you. I don't know why I didn't think of this. I guess I was trying to keep her with either Jack or Sam, so maybe I was thinking in the wrong angle.

Thanks for your suggestion.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Note" from AllenPitt
Neat idea, I always wished somebody from that future had made it through the Gate... would have made things more interesting. Air force regs.... yikes, they don't really cover this. They haven't gotten together yet, so could claim this isn't an infraction... it'd probably require a ruling by the president or something.
Buffy would be a huge bone of contention-all the intel agencies would want to squeeze her for future knowledge.... who would have custody? etc etc.
This just demands a sequel.
Comments from author:
It was the custody thing that was making it hard for me to continue. I wanted to keep Buffy with her parents, but didn't know how to write her transition. How would you feel if you went through something similar? Wouldn't you want to be with the person you were with before you left or with people that treated you well?

But the whole intel thing? How much does a 9 year old know about the state of affairs in any country? But there is the whole future thing isn't there?

As to a sequel or addition, if I can work something out, there will be another one.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Note" from RevDorothyL
It's never simple for Jack and Sam, is it?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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