Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from thunderer
Review:
Its twisted, Funny as hell. Got to say i am waiting for more.
Comments from author:
I'll get there eventually. I have to be in the right, or utterly wrong, mindset to do this fic. Don't worry. I'll get back to it.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [thunderer] • Date [13 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First week at the new school..." from UCantTouchThis
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OK, this is officially AWESOME. This chapter especially: a botched Unforgivable Potion summoning Pikachu (*squees over her favourite Pokemon*), the twins discovering Rocky Horror Picture Show and getting the best idea ever, which turns out to be getting Malfoy to sing "Sweet Transvestite"? MADE. OF. WIN.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I'd like to think it gets better from there, but that's up for debate.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [UCantTouchThis] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Rosewood
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Having just read through this entire fic within an hour, I've got to say I'm impressed. The main plotline is interesting and literally, one of a kind. But I'm not sure how I feel about this Harry. He makes me laugh and it isn't unbelievable that he was raised by Deadpool. Yet...he seems quite lame at the same time. A little bland, flat?
I just wish he'd do more things, show more of his personality than wacky ideas. There was a small moment in an earlier chapter when he tried to make up to Neville for breaking his wand, and that was unexpectedly sweet. And I really enjoyed his over-reaction to Emma's brain-affair with Scott.
If little Luna Lovegood could become Doctor Doom's favourite student, then Arthur Bea Wilson could pull off an awesome stunt or two. :D
I do know this is only a parody, and I know this sounds like constant complaining, but I am really into this fic, which is why I'm bothering to voice my opinion.
That said, I can't help but get a kick out of the character. He's funny and actually, honestly witty. It's amusing how he drags everyone into his schemes but they don't bow down to him either. And your writing style in general is easy to understand and smooth.
I'm really curious about Harry's childhood pre-X-Men. Like Weasel, Blind Al and Taskmaster. So I hope you'll add in more information about that in later chapter now that DEADPOOL IS AT THE SCHOOL!
WOOHOO!
Comments from author:
Well, we do know that Harry has some experience with The Box, so he does have some link to Blind Al. I haven't written much on this lately and I agree it is mostly his stunts rather than his personality, but like Deadpool, he's got depths. They might be just greater depths of insanity, but depths all the same. I do have an idea for an upcomming arch that might show this off a little involving time travel, dimensional travel and cookies.
But really? You read this whole thing in an hour? Wow!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Rosewood] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Dracarot
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Ah welcome back and brilliant return. And so the situation continues to deteriorate for all the straightmen of the Universe, although it is remedied by Jean Grey still being alive, the ex X men (the students at Xavviers who lost their powers) having a far greater survival rate than if Stryker's plan had succeeded, and the eventual prevention of One More Day being most likely on the horizon.
Is it just me or is the damage actually doing some scary amount of good, oh no... GRAY AND GRAY MORALITY GAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Morality? What's that?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Dracarot] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Loatroll
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:D I had almost forgotten Luna is being mentored by Dr DOOM.
Comments from author:
Then you can consider this a surprise!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from buffyrazz
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Why oh why did it take me so long to read this story..... think i need to sic Castle on the scriptwriters of my life.
1st: Luna as Dooms apprentice is quite possibly as scary as Harry being raised by deadpool.
2nd: This story has had me giggling like a subdued version of the Creeper - yes i know diff company but thats the comparison. Bravo
3rd: As soon as Harry/arthur was headed to Slytherin i was vocalising Dueling Banjos as i read.
4th: So good it deserves a stack of Uncle Buck sized pancakes with a side of toast u cant get thru the door.
looks up at the Author with big Puss in Boots eyes and says "Please sir, i want some more"
Comments from author:
Oh, don't worry, it's going to continue. There are two more books that Harry's read and needs to make opportune incorrect assumptions for maximum amusement. I'm glad you like it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Luna
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So glad to see an update! Insane as always.
Loved this: You'd really think that a House based around wit would know better than to pick on the crazy girl with the big honken space gun.”
heehee :)
And the COOKIE MONSTER was the best idea ever. You win the internet!
Comments from author:
Well, I'm glad I won the internet. I think I'll take it away from everyone and keep it safe in a box.
Cookie Monster was inspired. I haven't had ideas like that in a while and this fit the theme of the story perfectly.
And you should never pick on the girl with the big honken space gun. It's just not smart.
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from HiltonK
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W00t! Still laughing about the cookie monster. May never be able to enter toy shop again...
Comments from author:
Then here is another line: "Can you think of other things that start with C?" Cookie Monster leans over to pick up a wand. "Crucio starts with C. It might not be as good as a cookie, but is good enough for now."
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I'm working on it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Valkyrie
Review:
Good to see you're finally continuing this. I just flashed back to how they chose Doctor Doom as the new DADA teacher... Gold...
Comments from author:
Well, the other ones just weren't evil enough for the job. Well, maybe Seline, but sucking the life out of students that aren't Harry Potter might be going a bit too far.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Angry Horses, Z-List Heroes and a Secret Invasion" from Omegaprime
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Ok, you are now totally freaking me out here with the insanity factor.
Albus being a Skrull or just plain avoiding Harry for other reasons? The Punisher knowing the Cookie Monster AND the Swedish Cook as muscle and using Mr. CM to crack Mr. Malfoy? Deadpool influencing the house elves? Ghostrider talking to Fudge?
Poor everyone, especially Voldy and Jessica, I mean Albus.
Keep up the unmedicated insanity, I mean Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Albus isn't a Skrull, he's doing the same thing that happened in cannon Book 5, avoiding Harry because he thinks that Tommy can look through Harry's eyes and do his pseudo-telepathy thing and find out everything that's been going on. Harry's just making things up that fit what he's already decided. He's finding "facts" that fit his conclusion, not finding facts to help make a conclusion.
And as you might remember, Ghost Rider was left abandoned in Diagon Alley a few chapters ago. He's not even really sure where he is.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [2 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "House of Mmmmm....Good" from Drupadi
Review:
Oh hahahahaha that was awesome!! About half way through I totally had an image of the guys from Who's Line in my head doing little parts of different songs from the albums. ^_^
Comments from author:
Well, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Drupadi] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated