A fun read with it being unexpected that Fargo and Xander were family, but the real lol was Start getting told he didn't have clearance but Fargo did.
Comments from author:
Well, I thought that Xander and Fargo could have a lot of fun together. They might have gone in different directions, but I like to think they'd get along. People seem to like it. Thanks for reading!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
After reading the rest of the reviews I just thought of something,Stark is going to be pouting for weeks.Hmm,i wonder if Henry know too.
Comments from author:
No, Henry doesn't. Just those four. And Stark will pout for weeks. But he'll also do everything he can to find out what was going on. Thanks for reading!
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
ROTFLMAO...... I love this story. I never did like Stark and was quite happy he died. The fact that Fargo has clearance for something that Stark doesn't is wonderful. Thanks for the laughs.
Comments from author:
No problem. I'm glad I could supply them.
Review By [spring] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Good idea! Jo being a Watcher and Zoe being a Slayer is a little different, especially since Jack also knows about the supernatural (and Slayers), but not knowing that Zoe is a Slayer. It would be really interesting if you wrote a story about Xander visiting his cousin Fargo. So, do Fargo and Willow get along pretty well?
Comments from author:
I think that when they were younger, Fargo and Willow would get along quite well. When they're older...maybe it would still work out. I think it would be cool to see what they could come up with by putting their heads together. I might some time write a sequel or a prequel, but not for a while.
lols. Very cute. ahhh, I miss the Nathan and Jack show. :( Thanks for bringing it back, even if it is only for a minute.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was pretty disappointed when that happened in the show. It was a fun back and forth. I'm just glad they haven't killed off many of the other supporting characters. Even so, I'm still looking forward to next season.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
I love it and Fargo as Xander's cousin how cool. you could alway add a part where Xander shows up to check on things. Stark wondering where the guy with one eye came from and why he has higher clearance then anyone in town.
Comments from author:
I don't know if it's a matter of "higher" clearance, but rather clearance in a different line. Xander would still go into shock if he saw what really went on in Eureka! but I don't know if I'll go into it. We'll have to wait and see.
Other that Carter Coming across a little blaise about Zoe being a slayer ,i love it ( smile,smile Grin)
Comments from author:
Oh, I agree, that didn't work perfectly, but it wouldn't have worked as a story if I'd just let Jack rant and rave for about fifteen pages. It wouldn't have been nearly as fun. But I think when things catch up with him, he'll be back to his lovable grumpy self.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Very cute little story. I like it. Might be interesting if you go for a longer tale....maybe bring in some scoobies.....:)
Comments from author:
Well, I thought about it, but it really fits right here as a short story. I have too many other projects that I can't put aside. If I think of something, I might just do it. I'm glad you liked it all the same.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [maylith] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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