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Review of chapter "Clearance" from cyberfish
Review:
Other that Carter Coming across a little blaise about Zoe being a slayer ,i love it ( smile,smile Grin)
Comments from author:
Oh, I agree, that didn't work perfectly, but it wouldn't have worked as a story if I'd just let Jack rant and rave for about fifteen pages. It wouldn't have been nearly as fun. But I think when things catch up with him, he'll be back to his lovable grumpy self.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from maylith
Review:
Very cute little story. I like it. Might be interesting if you go for a longer tale....maybe bring in some scoobies.....:)
Comments from author:
Well, I thought about it, but it really fits right here as a short story. I have too many other projects that I can't put aside. If I think of something, I might just do it. I'm glad you liked it all the same.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [maylith] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I enjoyed this entire story and chuckled all the way through, but the ending with the whole 'gangs on PCP' and Stark not having clearance made me snort. Nicely done, thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I tried to keep it in character and I think it worked. I did it for a laugh and I seem to have achieved that goal.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from Orion
Review:
Nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Orion] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from FariaLyton
Review:
Awesome. That's really all I can say.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Now we need to see an annual review where the head Slayer(s) and Watcher(s) and Xander descend on the town and their clearances get them anywhere they want to go, and Nathan STILL doesn't have clearance to know why or who they are.
Comments from author:
Maybe, but I figure, that as long as nothing goes wrong, it should all work out. Thanks for reading
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clearance" from lumierelanuit
Review:
This story was great. I loved the bit where Stark didn't have clearance.
Comments from author:
Awe, he couldn't handle the real world in the Buffyverse. He just couldn't do it.
Review By [lumierelanuit] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from bucksavage
Review:
What can I say but...ROFLMAO!
Comments from author:
Thank you good reader, thank you.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from JediKnight
Review:
Freaking hilarious. Any chance of a sequel?
Comments from author:
Maybe if I think of one, but for now this is it. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clearance" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is freaking hilarious! Fargo as Xander's cousin is brilliant.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Well, thank you. I suppose this means I succeeded. Thank you again.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clearance" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
RotFLMAO! Oh, I loved this story! Especially cool how Fargo knows and Nathan doesn't; that's just got to drive Stark crazy.
Comments from author:
I like Fargo. He's pretty much my favorite character, closely followed by Vince. I just figured, out of all the scientists, he would be the most likely to be cool with the supernatural. Stark, I just don't think he could handle it. But it ended up well.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clearance" from JoeB
Review:
Very nice.

I only wish there was more Abuse Nathan in it.

Don't get me wrong, I liked the character, but anytime he got slapped in the back of the head it was fun times.

I liked the whole dynamic of who knew what, and steps that were taken.

Is it to much to hope that you might have plans to either expand or continue this storyline?
Comments from author:
No, I don't think I'll be expanding on it. It works well as a one shot. If I think of a sequel I might write it, but I've got a few other things on my plate right now, so it won't be for some time.

I did like it those few times Carter was able to get one over on Stark. I just thought it could work again this way.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [JoeB] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clearance" from DHX
Review:
the last line made the story. well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I thought it fit Stark fairly well.
Review By [DHX] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from Greywizard
Review:
That actually makes sense, given the various people involved. ;-)

Very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was trying to keep it fairly accurate. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clearance" from ranlynn
Review:
LOL

Oh My! I could actually see this work as an episode (or at least a scene) for Eureka.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I just got done watching the series again with a friend and this kind of just popped into my head. Thanks for reading!
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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