I enjoyed this entire story and chuckled all the way through, but the ending with the whole 'gangs on PCP' and Stark not having clearance made me snort. Nicely done, thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I tried to keep it in character and I think it worked. I did it for a laugh and I seem to have achieved that goal.
Now we need to see an annual review where the head Slayer(s) and Watcher(s) and Xander descend on the town and their clearances get them anywhere they want to go, and Nathan STILL doesn't have clearance to know why or who they are.
Comments from author:
Maybe, but I figure, that as long as nothing goes wrong, it should all work out. Thanks for reading
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
RotFLMAO! Oh, I loved this story! Especially cool how Fargo knows and Nathan doesn't; that's just got to drive Stark crazy.
Comments from author:
I like Fargo. He's pretty much my favorite character, closely followed by Vince. I just figured, out of all the scientists, he would be the most likely to be cool with the supernatural. Stark, I just don't think he could handle it. But it ended up well.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [mmooch] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Don't get me wrong, I liked the character, but anytime he got slapped in the back of the head it was fun times.
I liked the whole dynamic of who knew what, and steps that were taken.
Is it to much to hope that you might have plans to either expand or continue this storyline?
Comments from author:
No, I don't think I'll be expanding on it. It works well as a one shot. If I think of a sequel I might write it, but I've got a few other things on my plate right now, so it won't be for some time.
I did like it those few times Carter was able to get one over on Stark. I just thought it could work again this way.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [JoeB] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]