I kind of like where the story is going. I can already see the meeting between Xander and Jack O'Neill, I can tell you one thing it's going to be interesting. I just got one question what happens when angellis goes to kill Buffy in the hospital or with the battle with the judge?
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. The meeting with the Judge and Angelus is a must. As far as a meeting between him and his dad an alien race will make a big difference from canon.
Review By [xducare] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Intersting storyline. I generally dislike super xander fics but this one has potential because he more of an anti hero. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
You need either to let someone readthrough it o read it yourself to check for spelling mistakes: jelling/yelling and heel/heal are two examples I saw. Otherwise it seemed interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the heads up.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I don't really know much about Prototype other than it is a computer game. That said, this is a really cool idea, so I hope you keep writing. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I know the game isn't very popular. But, it's one of my favourites and this story-idea just wouldn't leave me alone.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
