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Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from (Past Donor)Methos
Review:
love it, seriously... gripped me from the start and now i can't wait to see more of this one...

had to add it to my 'fanart for my favorites' list...

http://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=11355&;chapter=122

Hope you like it :D

M
Comments from author:
You sir are awesome. I'm tempted to pull a Wayne and Garth and bow talking about how not Worthy I am.

Just for this I'm going to work on the next chapter NOW. This is wow amazing.

It's rather funny, I got a review recently telling me what I though was the Cajun word for doll Chetin, was in face basically the word for whore....

So yeah, I'm working on that but this is wow, I'm honored. I'm going to post the next chapter as soon as possible now. Thank you S much for this and for the review and especially the image. I'm going to use it next chapter and probably as a link in my sig everywhere. Thank you so much.
Review By [(Past Donor)Methos] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from ATLenya
Review:
oh my god, I love this story but PLEASE OH PLEASE!! Could you like not use the term "Catin" anymore? It's... not really an endearment honestly D: It means something like "bitch" or "slut" or even "libertine" if you get the drift..... I just winced everytime you used it 'cuz I was like "what? they're lovers and maybe lovebirds, why does he call her a slut?" =_= And yeah, I do know what I'm talking about 'cuz I AM French.... uh sorry, really sorry to tell it like that but it just really bothered me and all that D; -hug- -cling- =w='
If you want a term of endearment, you could use "chérie" or "ma belle" or even "ma puce" which translates in order, with : "darling/dear" ; "honey (maybe, I'm not sure xD)" ; "pet" .... so... uh... yeah....
(EDIT : uh I remember now that "doll" is "poupée" in french, and it is used as an endearment too xD)

Anyway, now on to the real review... I . LOVE . THAT . STORYYYYYY D8< and the "History of Violence" little snippet was just AWESOME!! =D Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
And that ladies and gentlemen is why you don't use internet dictionaries....

Also Cajun isn't quite the same as French even though they spawn from the same language originally Cajun is different. That being said I seriously doubt the word for slut changed into the word beautiful.... Although Xander might with his twisted sense of humor just to prove girls like the accent more than what your saying, but I still see your point.

This is why I was a bit reluctant to make a Xander/Remy fanfiction like this because I literally JUST copied this from the site.

"Catin (n.f.) 1. doll. 2. term of endearment for a female."

So now I'm a bit reluctant to use said site since if they got somethign like that SO wrong then what about other words? I know for sure I don't want to use Cherie since that's what Remy always calls Rogue. Hm, maybe could you P.M. or Email me and you can become my french/cajun consultant? I'm going to need to work on this soon or not have Xander say anything.....

Anyway Thanks for the Info, thanks for the commentary, and thanks for the review.I hope you'll email me.
Review By [ATLenya] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job so far, any chance of another reference to a graphic novel?
Comments from author:
I was referencing the movie, but I'm sure their will be a few here or their. if I haven't' read something I'm loathe to use it for total out of characterness.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from slmncpm
Review:
*giggles* ok.. i know it is very late.. but antarctica? i knew perfectly well you REALLY mean alaska... but my daughter and i are just cracking up. *hugs you* if it helps.. um.. i am an english teacher irl and sometimes.. it just makes me laugh the things that i, myself, screw up time, after time, after time, after... well... you get the idea. ahem. i'll stop now before you get a complex, because really.. you have made me laugh and laugh tonight and i really appreciate it!
Comments from author:
Dangit, um public school? I know it's above us on the map and that's about it... I fixed the problem in the story which means no one will know of my bete unless they read the reviews.... Crap....

But yeah, I understand my irl english teacher sometimes gets confused. English is a weird language at best what with the way things are the way they are. I mean technically speaking fone phish cheep keap could all be the correct ways to spell words but it's phone, fish, cheap, keep, just because of what they came from.

One of the more interesting parts of being the great American melting pot.

This is especially funny because in this story at least half of it should give an English teacher nightmares. Not just because of my bad English, but because one of the characters talks in third person which a character should never do, and because half of his dialogue is a totally different language which I'm sure I'm butchering.

But ((Again breaking a major English rule)) I'm glad you got a laugh out of the story, and again thanks for the review. Feel free to Email or P.M. me if you want to.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from slmncpm
Review:
*laughs* honey, last i knew there are only fifty states. yes, they do consider puerto rico and guam as TERRITORIES... but not yet states. beside.. if they did that would be four that aren't accessible by road. *winks*

love the story. keep it up?
Comments from author:
Um.... Um.... they forget Genosha and the the marvel state isn't real in this world?

No, I always thing that Anartica and Hawii are fifty one and fifty two. I always forget that their forty nine and fifty....

But the weird part is my Beta forgot this as well....

Thanks for the info, and thanks for the review.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great stuff.
Comments from author:
Thanks and thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from LFW
Review:
Good start. A big jump to Xander being with Faith; I am looking forward to what happened in between these times.
Comments from author:
I've decided to keep things a bit cannon just so I don't have to do the same old same old fighting thing. Key references and differences will be mentioned of course. If anyone's interested in certain thing's and asks me I'll put them in but most of it happened the same as it did in the series.

Two new chapters should be up soon, one short but with a lot of Xander's dialogue as I tried to get a handle on it, and the other a much better actual chapter.
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from purrfus
Review:
So far, so fun.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope to keep it interesting and thanks for the review.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The begining...." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting start.
Comments from author:
Thanks, the next chapter's at Beta so it shoudl be up son.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from ChaosRonin
Review:
nice to see more gmabit stuff always enjoy xander with gambits powers and skills, did anyone go as Amanda from the highlander series would love to see interaction between the two or mayb youl xover with highlander and hell meet the reall Amanda? that would be awesome anyways hope to see more soon great first chapter.
Comments from author:
Yups, I was planning to have her be in it. I think it would be fun. Thanks for the comment and thanks for the review. The next chapter should be up soon it's at Beta right now.
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from SadJack
Review:
Nice start up T, I agree that it was a little weak, but I know that you will pull through.
It was cool of you to give me a prompt for "RoR", I appriciate it.
Again, if you need any help, just email me and I will get back to you as quick as I can.
Thanks again.

SadJack

P.S. Dude, it really does look like an interesting beginning. GJ.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and your welcome, I'll probably have more up soon and we can see how it goes. I like the story it feels a bit weird but I'm still enjoying it, so I should have more up soon.
Review By [SadJack] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from JediKnight
Review:
Very good start, hoping that you'll have more soon.
Comments from author:
Me too, I shoudl have chapters two and three up soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The begining...." from slmncpm
Review:
i love xander and gambit has ALWAYS been my favourite x-men.. with wolverine as a close second. i LOVE THIS!!! please continue quickly??
Comments from author:
Okay and I'll try my best., thanks for the review.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The begining...." from Tjin
Review:
It looks interesting, i'll be keeping an eye on this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope to live up to your expectations.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The begining...." from kayron
Review:
So Xander will become Gambit. If I remember the Gambit character correctly, he had some problems with the Xmen, and they abandoned him at one point. Xander had issues with the Scoobies when they wanted him 'fray adjacent'. Xander might feel in sync with being Gambit.
Comments from author:
Nope, I'm planning to have him be Xander with Gambit's skills and a bit of his speech patterns. I'm going to do my best to keep him from being Gambit in Xander's body.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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