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Review of chapter "If You Wanna Live..." from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Another excellent chapter. I especially enjoyed Angel's misconceptions and the way Jimmy played with him, and Jimmy's thoughts about Spazz, Puke, Spuzz or whatever his name was made me giggle. Looking forward to the next section.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No War Without Warriors" from CPTSkip
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Lol! I know this must make me a bad person, but the mental image of them all covered in blue exploded demon slime amuses the heck out of me. This was another nice update and I am glad to see the group coming together. I hope we see Buffy and Olivia do some bonding next. And what is the undead pedophile doing in NYC? If he gets frisky, I hope Willow sets him on fire. Or at least portions of him. Lol! Sorry, but not a big Angel fan here.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No War Without Warriors" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really enjoyed this chapter, I like how you are writing the Detectives getting drawn in and used to the Buffy world of demons. Also like the little talks you had in this chapter between the Detectives and the Scooby's plus one gang.


Curious to see how things go with the new arrival!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Modern Rome Burning" from PATM
Review:
Chomping at the bit at this point, I'm impatiently reading this one for clues to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Relax, we're at chapter 17...you have 18-21 remaining, it shouldn't be that bad ;0). Next chapter will be up next week. Take care...

W.
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Modern Rome Burning" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very nice to have a fairly light chapter, the autopsy report was very well done and I like how you did Willow's reactions and thoughts during it.


Love how you are still exploring everyone's thoughts and feelings about finding out what is really out there.

Wispr
Comments from author:
The ripples from the reveal will be given voice through most of the rest of the story. Not as much, but you'll still read it. And yes, my beta mentioned something to me about very little plot development on the chapter, but the character info and the data received make up for it. =0)

Thanks!

W.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Modern Rome Burning" from CPTSkip
Review:
Good update and I love your Dawn as much as Alex seems to. I also like the way Willow can finally get through to Buffy when no one else in the universe seems to be able to do so. Thank you for the quick update also. Now please go and write more. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring Out Your Dead" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I'm so happy to see Willow's and Buffy's relationship getting back to firming footing, even with the Hellmouthy stuff going on. I like how you are doing the Detective's reaction in the aftermath of finding out about the supernatural.

Nasty and chilling villain you created!


Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring Out Your Dead" from PATM
Review:
Yeah Debbie gets rescued to raise hope and then...evil! But awesome.
Review By [PATM] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring Out Your Dead" from CPTSkip
Review:
Damn! Great update, but man! I really don't like you Big Bad. When they finally catch the vamp, they need to slowly lower it into a swimming pool filled with holy water. Maybe an inch an hour would do. You are one scary writer. See, I don't think you are deranged, just scary as hell. Well, maybe a little deranged. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something in the World Today" from PiedraLumbre
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Nice briefing so far, I was wondering how long you were going to keep them in the dark. Also the line about Alex as a Slayer made me giggle. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something in the World Today" from CPTSkip
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Lol! Well, Willow's briefing is going over well. Nobody fainted or threw up. Yet. Lol! Dang, another female psycho vampire. Dru is going to be ticked. I wonder if Dru will show up to help Buffy out of sher jealousy? Lol! Great update and as always I look forward to more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something in the World Today" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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Ahhh....I always have loved the "Big Reveal" times; you just kinda feel sorry for them a little bit, seeing their whole concept of reality swirling down the toilet...
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Watch Your Back" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Love the story so far. I really like the little touches that are thrown into the internal monologues that add flavor to the characters. Like Jimmy thinking of the frightening women in his life or Buffy not being able to drive.

However they must have a terrible budget for cabs. They really take a lot of them.

Anyway, good stuff.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something in the World Today" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Love how you got the two different shows meshing even more. The big reveal was very well done.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Watch Your Back" from PATM
Review:
So you intend to hide from me poor Siobhan's fate for a little while longer. Tenterhooks are painful.
Comments from author:
or tenterhooks are fun...really depends on where the hooks are placed...perspective and all of that...

thanks or maybe I should be saying sorry?
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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