Once again you're creating such a interesting and vivid story/plot line. I like how 'rea' you make the people with being overwork and such.

Wispr

Great update

Oh so glad to see you continuing this story arc and what an awesome first chapter.

Wispr

I like the idea of Alec and O being together. I always thought there was something between them.

You do such a great job setting the scene and the emotions of the scene in your stories. You switch the voices of your characters in a chapter and it just flows. Though, I did have a tough time figuring out whose voice you were using at the beginning of each scene because they were different characters.

Still, wonderful chapter and I'm looking forward to more, much, much, more!

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I'll give you a hint on what to expect character voice wise...it flips...OLS character (Buffy, Willow and Jimmy) to SVU character (Olivia, Alex and Elliot). There is no particular order on which character will be in one chapter, but say for chapter one, we've heard from Willow, Olivia and Jimmy. Next chapter expect something different with two scenes from SVU and one from Buffy...

Thanks for the review...I hope all of you will like what's in store...

Animal can equal brutal + uncaring. Excellent title and opening.

*hint*

Listen to Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace. If you don't have it, hit me up and I'll fix that. Or just go read the lyrics... ;0)

You got me! When you started the section written from Olivia's POV I initially thought it was Buffy and it just didn't make any sense to me. When I realized it was Olivia and not Buffy, I actually had to go back and reread it so I could understand what you had written. Nicely done, evil one. Lol! A vamp who victimizes kids. I think Buffy is going to take her time on dusting this one. Great update and I am so glad to see another of your stories playing out.

Now this is a chilling beginning! I look forward to another of your excellent stories. Merry Christmas!

And away we go...

As always, looking forward to your work.

A confusing opening (in a good way) and creepy opening. Good work! I can't wait for more and if your author notes are any indication then its going to be a long ride.

Thanks!

Interesting. I'm curious to see where you're going with this. This prologue was both eloquent and disturbing. I particularly liked this line: 'the blaze holds poetry few masters of the pen have ever been able to capture.' I think there's some truth to that regardless of the context, fire speaks to something deep inside people in a way relatively few other things do.

P.s. I really enjoyed Dark Passenger, I just haven't felt like writing another review for it yet.