I want more of this story, please keep the chapters coming out. PLEASE!

ahh I see no problem in that regard for a while. I still have 160k words to go through :)

Good story so far.

thanks

I found your story to be quite amusing. I also like your hints as to the after effects of Helloween. And I must say your Drusilla was quite mad, in a warped but humorous way. I look forward to more of your twisted tail, I mean tale.

yep Dru was funny wasn't she? :)

sweet

this story's got potential, and is quite enjoyable to read.

thank you

LOL! Only smart one? I'm afraid the stupidity gene is universal in Sunnydale that night!

Hatten strikes again.

"By the way, did you say Giles? IS that Rupert Giles from England?"

In Giles line of work, questions like that should be reported.

A year younger Dawn, I like it.

Enjoyed it.

ahh it should be, but I think Xander had other things in his mind :)

Very nice. I loved the interaction among Xander, Dawn, and Willow.

thank you

good

The story is actually pretty good. Can't wait to see what halloween costume he gets. Can't wait for the next chapter!

thank you and here is the next one :)

Interesting beginning. I look forward to more of your story.

awesome

I love this story so far and really can't wait to see what sort of costume you end up choosing. I had a scarily brilliant idea for a costume that I have not seen before, Rafiki from the Lion King, his level of spiritualism and mysticism is a step beyond even most Shamans but even better he is all about natural order and the balance that is the circle of life. Now take Rafiki's belief system as a base to use to build on with the dozens of types of human magics available and you can end up with quite a scary shamanistic mage.

The costume idea would work wonderfully in this story but as well as on its own.

What do you think?
~Reflections

Sadly I had to look that up on wikipedia to even understand something about Rafiki. Out of all stories i have seen i have managed to miss the Lion king.

I know i am ashamed. I will amidiatly punish myself by having a cup of tea. :D Hmmm tea.

That is a good idea, but the story is an old one and mostly done already and you will see what he will dress up as.
Thanks for you comment John Hatten Carlsson.

I love it, great start, very good work. I only saw a few small grammar errors. All and all well done.

thank you and about the grammar thing, I do my best and word isn't to helpful in that regard also :)

Hmm.....It would be interesting if he were to get a clothing that belonged to a Gold Digger's Werecheetah character.......just to watch the fun.....

thank you for the review, but I think that won't happen :) If you want a Gold Digger Xover read my story Fury Moon I started to post here also :)