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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Pointer
Review:
‘You are thinking of Ukrainians’

lol

The problem with making outrageous demands is sometimes they're met.


Enjoyed it.


Pointer
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you enjoyed it :-)
Review By [Pointer] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great chapter topped by Thor's moment of irritation.
Comments from author:
Thor's moment of irritation... Hammer Time? :-p
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SilverWave
Review:
Great fight :)

Cheers.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from pcody
Review:
Beta Read (as always) for Ch2:
In reality far "few" than three hundred
-should be "fewer"
Comments from author:
I think I went with "less" on re-reading but thanks anyway.
Review By [pcody] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Marcel
Review:
The second half of the chapter felt a bit hurried... I think you're trying to get rid of the replicators but don't want to spend time on it. To be honest, I'd have rather skipped the whole thing and left them dead in the black hole.

Loved the idea of the Terran Empire though... IOA will go bonkers.
Comments from author:
Terra forever :-p
Review By [Marcel] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Preemptive Recc.
Comments from author:
Retaliatory review response :-p
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Pointer
Review:
Glad to see the new part going so fast. Looks like you're off to a good start.

A better cover up than i expected. Of course, that level of EMP would fry most civilian computers, phone systems, electrical systems including electrical transmission and generation....

Enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
I reasoned after the Goa'uld Busters they've been hardening things against EMP a lot more than in our universe.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice start of the sequel.

By the way, you might wish to add a closing italic tag to the end of this chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny some Coconut rice::

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Sanity calms, but madness is more interesting.
- John Russell
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Comments from author:
Thanks for the review :-)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CJNyfalt
Review:
A great start of the new book of the story.

I especially liked the part about how to mislead the public and the last scene of the chapter.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it :-)
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am a very happy reader to see another update to your tremendous series. But even with all the wonderful technobable, the marvelous battle scenes, and the terrific characterizations, it is your humor that pushing your series into the level of top ten best fanfics of all time, IMHO. When I read: ‘Hello’ the girl replied, starting to blush. ‘If you’re really Sharp of Canada that must be your Hockey Stick’ she said, pointing at the side-handled baton. ‘Can I have a look at it up close?’ she asked hopefully. I laughed so hard I had to stop reading because my eyes were full of tears. And even as I read more of you story, I still kept getting giggles attacks as I remembered the little girl's question.

Your cover-up of the Snakes' orbital attack was both logical, clever, and probable would work since nobody really trusts their governments any more. Sharp's line to the Snakes caused me to break out in giggles once again. Yes, I agree that any of the Civilization games is a great learning experience for a person wanting to learn how to intimidate a foreign enemy. And if your enemy won't be intimidated, you can always nuke their stupid little civilization back to the Stone Age. Perfect X-COM logic, no? I look forward to more of your excellent storytelling.

Edit: I have dyslexia and it took me more than five minutes of staring at the title of this new story to finally figure out what was bugging me about your new title. The play on words with confusing me with "Terror"/"Terra" caused me to waste five minutes out of life. Thanks a lot. Lol!
Comments from author:
Sorry for costing you the five minutes :-p
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Good stuff. Always glad to see new stuff to read :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great new chapter but for some reason the scene with Sharp and Dr Lee had me expecting something was going to go wrong.
Comments from author:
Sometimes things go right :-p
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darthridian
Review:
hehe, civ, that was a great game in it's time, and sharp doing his research on it, i could actually see him doing that. :D

great work mate hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Civilization... the game that screwed up my first year at university :-p
Review By [darthridian] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SilverWave
Review:
Well thats a fun start!

Thanks :)
Comments from author:
You're welcome :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Baughn
Review:
Adding nanotechnology to the story would of course mess up /everything/, not least since SG-1 treats nanotech in an incredibly unrealistic way (It's magic! Only science!), but you might find this link interesting anyway (multi-page): http://www.mccarthy.cx/WorldSystem/

The conclusions are possibly incorrect, and certainly require more detailed analysis, but it's still a decent introduction.
Comments from author:
Nanotech is too convenient by half ;-)
Review By [Baughn] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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