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Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from sevter
Review:
*pokes at fic*

It's an intriguing start. I thought Willow should have learned her lesson by now. Any chance for updates?
Review By [sevter] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from musumenosuoh
Review:
oh wow..... can't wait for more!!!!!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from HuantedDarkling
Review:
this is awesome i cant wait for more please update soon
Review By [HuantedDarkling] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from RojoOjo
Review:
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Review By [RojoOjo] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from Chaoskitten
Review:
Please, please tell me that this fic is going to be continued. I want to find out how X is saved.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from Eureka
Review:
Good story, and hoping that you haven't quit it. I just found it and would LOVE to read where this is going to go.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from ICE
Review:
update soon please
Review By [ICE] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from Kaien
Review:
Please, please update! Wonderful story, I'm really enjoying it, but it's really a bad place to leave Xan and Grimmy. Here's hoping to see more soon. Thanks!
Review By [Kaien] • Date [7 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from JoWinchester
Review:
I can't wait to see where this goes for Xander and Grimmjoww, it's just too perfect a pairing for them not to last such an amazingly messed up problem.

I figure at some point you'll bring Willow into the equation and have a confrontation between her and Xander which will be beyond epic with your style of writing.

Really am glad that someone has taken the time to really pick at both fandoms and make sure that every little detail is correct too!
Review By [JoWinchester] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from Winterhart
Review:
I love what you've got so far can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [Winterhart] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update soon
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from silvergaurd
Review:
love the new chapter. Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from Yasuko
Review:
OK. Can I KILL WILLOW? Please... with a cherry on top.
Comments from author:
HAH. Everyone wants to hurt Willow. My readers are all more protective of Xander than even Grimmjow is.
Review By [Yasuko] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from HealerTwilight
Review:
Awww D***, Xan just can't catch a break. And I really hate Willow right now.
One thing bothers me though. Why does Xander think Hollows have no heart? Sure the first two forms are pretty much just all the bad emotions combined with hunger, but with what The First did, didn't Xander skip those phases? Adjuchas can obviously feel other emotions and are quite different creatures than newly 'born' Hollows and Menos Grande.
I mean, just look at Nel, she doesn't have a vicious bone in her body, and even before she was Chibi'ed she wasn't cruel or mean. They don't seem to feel things *quite* like humans do, but close enough.

Ooh, and when Ichigo shows up and Szayel gets his dumb ass killed, what will Grimmjow do? Could Kisuke play a part? I mean he's not exactly aligned with either camp,what with being an outcast to the soul society, and he most definitely doesn't like Aizen. Could he help? He'd probably find the whole thing fascinating, and won't want to automatically dissect Xander upon meeting him, which is a plus. Please? Kisuke is my favorite character. *Looks Hopeful* I'm also rather fond of Kisuke/Ichigo pairing, though I doubt you'll go there. *G*
Comments from author:
If you remember, Willow sees Xander turn into the first form when he escapes the First and when you get Xander's first POV as an adjuchas he's talking about being smaller than he should be. He did go through the first two stages, I just kinda glossed over them quickly. Even just the deterioration of the soul chain normally takes about a year, so I had to do something to speed everything up.

According to the Bleach canon, Hollows are just that, hollow. They lost their hearts to despair/anger/loneliness etc. and the hollow hole is a representation of the fact that their hearts are literally missing. They are evil by nature, but the more they evolve the more humanity they can regain. Think of Spike, who was soulless but still able to care about people vs Angelus who was also soulless. Hollows like Nel, who are capable of emotion are the exception to the rule and Xander's in a place mentally where he is thinking the worst of himself.

I'll try to work Urahara in. I'm fond of him as well. What makes you think any of the Hueco Mundo invasion is going to go the same way as canon? -Smirks- I have drastically different plans, which is good actually, since my current story outline can very easily include Urahara. He was already going to be in at least one scene, but thinking about it I could probably expand his part, I hadn't really planned that much in depth yet.
Review By [HealerTwilight] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not All Fairy Tales End Happily" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
I've really enjoyed the quick updates... but I can wait .. but it better be a decent size chapter for a long wait!!! *sniff* poor Xander.. they gotta help him! They just gotta! :_( However I did enjoy reading your update, your writing is very well written, I can picture the story very clearly and follow along totally... Awesomeness!!! Looking forward to the next update, whenever it may be! :)
Ryen
Comments from author:
I'm glad you can picture the world I'm pulling out of my head piece by piece. I can see everything, but I'm never sure if it's translating well into text. It's great to hear that you can visualize the scenes.
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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